Sometimes the sarcasm isn't necessary. But I must being doing good to attract the attention of Ascension members from time to time. Amiright or amiright?
that last sentence is all wrong. it should have been "This is the latter." but you tried to make yourself look smarter. or were you actually referring to some kind of ladder ?
I was referring to a ladder, but not a physical one. I wasn't trying to make myself "lookk" smarter. I was being vague. Interesting how you noticed tho
My d00d... some people will find anything negative they can to pull from you. If the only thing they have to say is “where are the stanzas” or TL; DR... fucc em. This was decent. You can always do better... still some cringe at times... but it was decent. Most of these people are not qualified to give any advice on writing shít in the first place.
I literally said it was nice, I only asked because I find poems broken in stanzas more desirable to read. :lol: Don't see how was that negative ??