Boring update sorry leads into some... Fun. Youll see ************************ "EEEEE!!!" that's the reaction I got when I let Anne do everything. My birthday is Friday aka, in 2 days. She says it'll be a sure fire way to make me forget about the past two weeks. In those past two weeks.... My best friends and animals have died and my stalker attacked me, not to mention my one true love loving someone else. Anne put her anger aside for this shopping spree. We were at the mall looking for a dress. All the scars and bruises were mostly healed so Anne wanted to find something showy. Dress after dress she tossed into dressing room calling me out to see each. She was waaay more picky than me. I slipped into a deep blue skin tight strapless long dress, it accented my curves well but Anne waved it saying my carmel smooth skin is to gorgeous to be competing with deep rich colors. So I pulled on a soft yellow knee length one strap that was super cute. "Ew no draw attention to you not an ugly dress!!" then after about one hundred dresses I pulled on a rosey dress that clinged in the right places and flowed down around my legs with a slit in the front to show off my calves and whatever heel Anne decides to find. I handed her my credit card which my mom gave me for this(only to buy birthday things, her and Anne were collaborating). I was back in my usual clothes, much happier. I was excited for the new dress though. I got to the spa, which I had reservation at, and got ready for relaxation. Hours later Anne was there to take the now pampered me back home for beauty sleep. Anne and I were excused from today and tomorrow because of a project we did earlier this year. Friday came much faster than planned, I woke up not even realizing it until my phone dinged telling me that ever told me happy birthday. I smiled grabbed my bag and headed out not thinking twice about the fact my family didn't mention it. I stepped out to a big yellow jeep with a red bow atop it. With a huge smile I rolled my eyes and pulled down the bow. I slipped into it inhaling the new car smell and read the card. It was a funny 16 year driving kind of card with a note from my mom inside. Hope you like the jeep it's brand new! Use it to go to Anne's latter for a party Love mom. I was content with that. It may seem my family aren't as bad as I make them out but they are. My mom only remember because I was so mad last year the 5 consecutive time she forgot it, that would have been ok but then she got so mad saying I was selfish and lazy when I asked her to make me pancakes for breakfast. Then my dad and brother forgot so.... I arrived at school receiving happy birthdays from everyone. It was a great day but everything went by so fast. Before I knew it, I was being pushed into Anne's car while my jeep was being "taken care of" by Tom. After a trip to my house for a shower we rushed to her house. At her house I was immediately taken into her giant bathroom and seated in a big chair in front of the long mirror. "It would be of your best interest to sleep," she warned so I plugged in my headphones and fell into a deep sleep. Unfortunately I didn't fall asleep fast enough to not see the huge eyeshadow kit lip sticks mascaras eyeliners other various beauty supplies and hair supplies. To soon Anne woke me up to do the last touches facing away from the mirror. She barked commands like look(_insert any direction here_) tilt your head and sit up straight."There," she finally said, "and I was amazed at how little we needed! No concealed for your smooth skin, and your eye color is perfect the slightest color brings it out, and your lips are beautiful." Half of her tone was kind and sincere the other half was think with green weeding growing jealousy. "And don't get mr started on your hair!" This came from Leah who arrived early to help with her sister Chay. I laughed at my friends and Anne urged me to the closet before I saw myself. The dress was pulled onto me and I stepped into the pastel peach stilettos Anne chose for me. Then she closed the door behind me and all three of them stood in front of me. They all smiled proud of their creation accented with lovely jewelry they let me borrow. But I smiled at my beautiful friends, their skin glowing(even in the dim closet light) eyes sparkling and dresses accenting their bodies. Leah and Chay had little black dresses while Anne wore a tight silver dress and stilettos-but was still only 5'2". Then they spun me around and I saw a beautiful girl i didn't recognize. Her nails were all done and easy to see against the smokey rose strapless dress that was skin tight until her knees then flowed around her legs. Her wrists held faux pearls that matched the double strand that lay on her neck being the only brake in a long expanse of carmel skin. Her golden hair glistening and falling in thick curls. Silver eyes looked out masked in a light lilac and grey smokey eye work gloriously with her her moist pink lips. "Wow." And I enjoyed everything in my life for that short lived moment.
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*Marks PoV* (previous night) I'm pathetic. I held my cold hands on my red puffy checks. I'm supposed to be a man! Why am I cry so much. A man shouldn't cry over tiny things like.... They came again salty warm unstoppable. I sighed and brushed them away as I reminded myself Rene was no small matter. She was everything. Since that day... That wretched day when-no don't think about it you wailing baby. Ever since then that pocket knife that I've carried since I got it as a young boy..... It was starting to burn a hole through my pants just begging to be used. It wanted me to open the biggest sharpest blade holding it tightly in my hand and push it through my neck and pull across with a long leaking red line forever showing it's path it took to my death. Or maybe down my forearm tracing the artery draining my life still allowing me to have an open casket. My mom would be pissed. The same thoughts as I've had all week. If I could have a different view, another mental monologue echoing for just a little difference a break in the stupid pattern. I was beginning to hate patterns, I crave change.... So does Rene. STOP! I shook myself back to what I was doing. I held a card. Invitation... To, Rene's big SIXTEENTH!!! It was obviously Anne's creation, and for the first time that made me happy. I didn't care about the fact it would be big and over done , only that it allowed her to slip up and invite me. I smiled and got everything ready for tomorrow night. *Toms PoV* I stepped into Anne's big house. Ten minutes late.... At least 300 people were already there. Anne had gone all out like way out. The theme was fire and ice and Anne managed to get a ton of pyro and laser for the fire and ice sculptures and icy looking light fixtures for the ice. I wore dark blue slacks a white collard button down with a ice blue tie. Anne made me dress with the theme, not just me though. Guys had fiery ties or ice like colors while girls had torn red dresses mimicking flames or blue mini dresses with sparkles each had their makeup done to resemble the opposite of their dress. All cliche all boring all expected. Many watched my expression to see if I'd like what I saw. I didn't. I knew I was a little more noticeable, all the girls always looked out to get a glimpse of me and guys envied me. I hated that, which is why I hang with Rene. She treats me like any other human being not like this small town's celebrity. Unfortunately Anne hangs with her to, I can tell she isn't exactly always welcome by Rene but she never freaking leaves and she only hangs with Rene to be near me. Another irritating groupie, she wasn't pretty short-a midget- dull plain eyes poor humor hard to please rarely happy with me. Rene was the opposite and I wanted to see her so badly. Then I did. Many men looked at her but she didn't notice she was laughing with her friends. Not the friends I knew her with, the ones that rarely made her smile, no the older ones or from a different school, they made that beautiful smile appear. Her dress accented her entire body showing her sexy smooth leg that perched gracefully in the high stilettos. She was a klutz so it amazed me how graceful and easy she walking in the heels that made her as tall as the senior guy she now spoke and joked with. She glowed with contagious happiness, her rosy lips parted into a smile that made my heart melt. Her bright eyes shone silvery contrasting the little dab of smokey makeup the girls put on her. Her hair was so silky and lead my eyes back down to the pearls that draped over her exposed chest. Her dress stopped being beautiful as soon as my eyes hit the fabric. She was much better than dress. Her being so happy made everyone in the room realize this. "Eyes up," a stern owning voice rang out. At first I thought it was her dad then I saw him. "She not yours," I saw this shook him a little so I smirked an continued, "I can do whatever I want with her, she loves me and trusts me." I chuckled at the pain in his eye. Serves him right, and I headed to Rene intending to tell her the truth about my feelings and kiss her. But no. I couldn't count how many this stopped me from doing that but the biggest block was the look on her face as she smile at me joyously but lit up even more as she looked over my should at him. My heart was broken beyond repair. It hurt.
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I could hear the thump of the bass as we neared the living room. Leah and Chay had changed my dress so it was even more beautiful. The one red strap was taken down and replaced by a sparkling sky colored silk, starting the new diagonal flow of the dress Chay cut. The strapless side of the top was now blue and white and bedazzled at the neck. A layer of the ruffle flowing down my legs were changed to translucent white. I have never felt more gorgeous! I loved everything about me at that moment. About 300 people had shown up on time, a hundred most likely being fashionably late. I was quickly sucked into my older friends, I laughed and had a sincerely awesome time. Then our old friend Erika came in, she switched schools because she had some issues with people. I loved that chick she understood me so much!!! Anne wasn't acquainted with my friends and eventually left our little group. I was so glad FINALLY!!! I could be around people I really love. Bryan, an old friend of my brother was here he came of and cracked a joke. Laugh boomed in my crowd and I glanced up. Tom! My mind screamed. I was about to run up and hug him(looking very attractive in his dress cloths I might add) when I saw Mark. He slinked in, hands in pockets looking scared. He looked cute but with the blue blazer and slacks he had on over his white collar shirt he looked damn sexy. My heart was flying, he came! He came FOR ME!!! My mind was screaming that but my common sense told me, only because he was invited. "Eyes up," he called. "Shes not yours. I can do whatever I want with her." I rolled my eyes I should have known Tom and Mark wouldn't get along. I smiled and pushed the two away from each other. I first wrapped my arms around Tom's strong neck-to my great surprise I was almost his height- and he returned wrapping hard arms around my waist pulling me in tight picking me up and whispering Happy Birthday gorgeous in my ear. He set me down and I turned to Mark pulling him in by the shoulders and said thanks for coming. He pushed me away(which made me sad for a moment) then pulled me to a dance floor Anne made. My favorite song, Moonlight sonata, was playing so we danced slowly and pressed together. I was beginning to get lost in him, we talked a little he was very kind, asking about how I was, the party, and things that couldn't make me sad. I was having the time of my life when he stopped and handed me over. I glanced up. Tom. "Oh hey," I said blushing. "You want to dance?" "Sure, I've never seen you slow dance this could get interesting!" he chuckled and smiled beautifully. I continued to dance with him until the song changed we were laughing and goofing off, Tom was so fun to be around, it was easy to be myself with him. We walked by Mark and I couldnt help but forget Tom for a moment as I smiled at his angelic face. He smiled back and allowed Tom to take me. This night couldn't get better. Damn it, shouldn't have said that.