Chpt 4 bad guys I woke up in the largest bedroom on the top floor there was a window to the east side letting in light. Now there was a door but I didn't feel like walking down steps. So opened the window and dropped myself out. I landed softly where the others where the others were. Then we were running. We got to the place, since I was newest I stayed back, and of course with my amazing luck the 3 STRONGEST bad guys appeared. The man looked familiar, he wore a black suit and shades he had chocolate brown hair(mind reading say he's Mr.E). The other 2 were females they looked alike both w/ soft blue eyes
Ps- this is taking place in a forest in the US they had gone to canada where one of the bad guys tht killed a Canadian SH is staying. Bree is staying in an abandoned old gas-station. Thnx 4 comments n Srry this wasn't 1 whole part idk WAT happened>.<
This is the ENTIRE Chpt 4 Chpt4 bad guys I woke up in the largest bedroom on the top floor there was a window to the east side letting in light. Now there was a door but I didn't feel like walking down steps. So opened the window and dropped myself out. I landed softly where the others where the others were. Then we were running. We got to the place, since I was newest I stayed back, and of course with my amazing luck the 3 STRONGEST bad guys appeared. The man looked familiar, he wore a black suit and shades he had chocolate brown hair(mind reading say he's Mr.E). The other 2 were females they looked alike both w/ soft blue eyes
Om....fg I really hate this... 1 more try The other 2 were females they looked alike both w/ soft blue eyes
blondes. The paler freckled one(Haley) had long straight blonde locks while the other was short dusty blonde(Skye). They seemed so nice until Haley punched me in the face. That got me POed so I started fighting. Considering my strength I was winning, I had repeatively crushed Haley's face in but she healed again. Finally I threw Mr.E into the door and knocked out Skye. Haley apparently had found an ax in this small cement room that had water leakage every where. She chucked it at me. It crushed into my neck nearly decapitating me.
Chpt 5 Mad NOW I was MAD. The last thing I did in my right mind was lunge at Haley. I watched myself through the frightened eyes of Skye who had just healed. My hands dung into Haleys neck like claws. Haley tried to scream out but only blood came out, she clawed weakly at my face. I yanked one of my hands out of her neck, wrapped it around her head, and pulled hard. Her face was completely turned around when her limp body fell to the ground and I went for Skye. I saw my face come inches from hers as we fell to the floor. Her hand clenched and live electric wires hit my back, this was the stupidest move she could have made. I watched in awe as my eyes turned electric blue and little blue electric waves went over my skin. My strongest power, electricity. My hands flew down towards Skye's face. She flinched but my hands hit the puddle we fell in. The room was alight with blue electricity, I felt the pain Skye felt mentally. She froze the water we were in, getting herself trapped as I was stronger and keeping the water ice. I made the cover her face preventing her from breathing. I stood and looked around for MrE. When I didn't see him my mind came back. I felt so tired so I just sat down and waited for the others to come. I just kill 2 people... I looked back to see the corpses gone.
this is too ghetoo u should write more professionaly n with more details. you got spellin errors also but i like ur ideas u got an imagination