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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *LilySnape (01), Nov 20, 2011.
Elle: you klutz! You dropped a bloody potion on my notes!
It was an accident!
Elle: *Hisses, hitting her*
-Kicks her legs-
Elle: *Falls a bit, socking her in the jaw*
-Groans in pain-
Elle: *Growls*
-Tries to get free-
Elle: *Punches her in the gut*
-Groans and hangs limp-
Elle: *Drops her, growling*
-Whispers a spell to trip her up-
Elle: *Stands up, holding both fists and swings hitting her shoulder*
-Screams in pain as my shoulder breaks-
Elle: *Hisses* Enough?
-Casts another spell to knock the wind out her lungs-
Elle: *Falls back, standing up, doing the same move as for her ribs*
-Staggers back blinded by pain-
Elle: *Growling*
-Blacks out and collapses on the floor-