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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *LilySnape (01), Nov 20, 2011.
*choking
Sam!
-Unconscious and still dying-
Try's CPR again-
Heart thuds sluggishly-
Try's to help- Sam please don't go!
-Heart beat gets quicker-
I kiss you- Sam!
-Smiles- Jake
Danielle: *Leans against a tree, coughing, rubbing her arms*
Sam!-tears appear
-Hugs him tight- I'm here babe
Vanessa: -Rolls my eyes- Rejoice with your boyfriend while I go grieve for your daughter.
Melody: Are you okay? *Walks up to her*
She wasn't my daughter!
Vanessa: Then why did you keep her?! -My eyes so pure hatred-
She was my aunts daughter! I was looking after her until her real dad was found!
Vanessa: Then you should have kept doing that! -Punches her square in the face and walks away-
-Collapses on the floor unconscious-
I look at the two and point my wand at vanessa-IMPIRO