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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *LilySnape (01), Nov 20, 2011.
Lauryn: *Grabs Ari's hand and drags her to the room*
Ari: -Laughs-
Lauryn: Come on!
Ari: I'm coming! -Laughs and follows her-
Lauryn: *Laughs and opens the door*
Ari: Wow! -Looks around the room-
( Is Lewis still with Angelina? )
3 Yup.) Angelina: *Holds Lewis asleep, outside in the light rain* Shhhh....
Lewis: - looks up at angelina - are wu ok? ( that's about as good as I can get wit baby talk )
() Angelina: It's hard to say Lewis...
Lewis: what wong? ( )
(THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID)
Angelina: Mommy and daddy....Mommy and Daddy, lewis....
Lewis: I don't know my mummy - looks at the lake -
Angelina: *Holds Lewis, covering him from the rain*
Lewis: - smiles
Angelina: It's quite grey outside....
Lewis: - nods -
Angelina: *Stands up, holding lewis* Why don't we walk around and look at everything?
Lewis: ok - looks around q