[I*]it was in the woods Amy Lover roamed in horror knowing she was lost[/I*] [I*]this is all in Amy's point of view[/I*] Oh no where am I and where is laina she must have gotten lost and we seperate . I can't be lost but that makes no sense cause I am. What am I gonna do? [I*]there's a rustling in the woods Amy runs[/I*] Oh my gosh what is that noise? [I*]Amy sees a house[/I*] I should go in there. [*I]as Amy walks in she sees a shadow run across the room[/*I] Is that you laina? [I*]Amy sees laina and runs up to her only to see laina's bloody face face,Amy runs and the possessed laina runs after her[/I*] Where am I going to go. [I*]Amy falls and watches as laina slowly limps towards her,as Amy screams laina slowly eats Amy first biting into her bloody pale face then slowly eating her arms till there is nothing but bones and blood and gore[/i*] Tell me what you think I know it wasn't the best sure wasn't all that Scary but its decent
Still a horrid attempt at literature. I tried giving you pointers, tips, references and the like yet you gave me (And the other commenters) Terrible feedback, and threatened to kill yourself, a childish way of reacting to criticism. No support, Clianni, or whatever your username was before you changed it.