Horror High

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *LilySnape (01), Jan 7, 2012.

  1. Told you I'd tweak it 
     
  2. DUN DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUN
     
  3. BUM BUM BUUUUNNN!
     
  4. THE ENDING IS THE NEXT UPDATE 
     
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    ~At 8~

    I waited nervously in a clearing my dagger well hidden behind my back. I realised I was getting an audience. Mr M appeared and smiled warmly, he quite obviously knew who I was killing.
    "Now Lilian don't forget our lessons."
    I nodded my eyes welling up with tears. I looked away from him and heard a rustling. Satan himself revealed himself.
    "Lilian Summers. I am Satan. Mr Satan to you."
    I nodded not really following all I heard was blah blah blah. Satan quickly took Mr M and hid behind trees watching me.

    Tom strolled into the clearing smiling,
    "And to what do I owe the pleasure Miss Summers?"
    I faked a giggle.
    "Tom I really am sorry."
    Tom looked at me,
    "For going away for a while? You got transferred you couldn't-"
    I shook my head putting a finger to his lips,
    "Not that."
    He looked down at me with a confused expression,
    "Then what?"
    I pressed my lips to his urgently, as I did I took my dagger out of my back pocket and slowly moved it towards his chest.
    "L-Lily!"
    He looked at me hurt and upset, even a bit of anger was there. I closed my eyes,
    "Tom I love you, so much."
    He hugged me closely,
    "Then don't Lily let's just run please."
    I shook my head tears streaming.
    "I- I can't just run Tom!"
    "Lily, stay with me..."
    I looked straight in his eyes and stabbed him in the chest. His knees buckled. I gave him a departing kiss.
    "I'm so so Sorry Tom. I love you."
    With Toms last breathe he whispered,
    "I love you too."
    He closed his eyes and lay motionless.
     
  6.  Told ya so... Lily wouldn't let a little thing like true love stop her...
     
  7. Uh... There's a sequel is there not and like I said... MAGIC WHAT CANT IT DO? 
     
  8. LILY IS A NECROMANCER! 
     
  9. MEANIES!! 

    Maybe i just won't make the sequel and you'll have wait until it's published 
     
  10. It won't be published D:<
     
  11. I loves it!!
     
  12. My point exactly Kira. 

    I am still gonna do the sequel cause I enjoy writing this. 
     
  13. Thank you Ari 

    See Ari is nice 
     
  14. Who cares?! YOU KILLED TOM!
     
  15. And Kira she was my favorite character!
     
  16. ITS A DAMN STORY KRIS! Fudging Hell!