I'm reading this Josh. Don't give up. Not everyone reads my story as well . But write because you love it. Not because people will read. Btw. Am I dead?
Sophie We followed the Captains into the forest slowly. We inched step by step, slowly but surely making it deeper into the forest, closer to the heart of it. We were treading on unknown ground, which was very dangerous. We were cautious, very. Every single leaf that rustled briefly found dozens of barrels pointed at it. The journey seemed endless; stopping whenever we heard a sound, and sneaking into the forest slowly and stealthily. All of a sudden, one of the Captains, the guy who had a 'crush' on me thrust his fist into the air. All of us stopped dead in our tracks. The silence following was eerie. It was broken by hostile gunfire. A few men were downed immediately. A soldier shouted, "Ambush!" Everyone started randomly spraying bullets at all directions. The trees surrounding us were cut down instantly, exposing five remaining rebels, all of which were armed with RPGs. They raised their RPGs and aimed them at us "Oh shit." muttered Nana under his breath. We all braced for impact. I closed my eyes and covered my face with my arms. One second. Five. Ten. Nothing happened. I slowly opened my eyes to find the five rebels kneeling on the ground, all of which had arrows sticking out of the sides of their heads. Then they fell flat on their faces. A woman rode her horse bareback towards us. She went up to the guy (you know who) an nimbly jumped of her horse. She shook hands with him. "Daisy Sweets. Don't ask." With that, she jumped back on her horse and ride off, all of us following her automatically.