Honor

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Josh-PIMD (01), Mar 21, 2011.

  1. Forums? *Landed on the ground
     
  2.  I know I know!! It's Qin!!! 
     
  3. LOL it's Sophie... Qin will appear later in a large battle.
     
  4. Yay! Sophie!!!!!! 
     
  5. Fletcher

    I was amazed by the female's skills. And her shotgun. I wanted it badly!!! A limited edition Final Fantasy Dragon's Breath? I need it to live! But it wasn't appropriate, the time. Josh's dropped jaw, I closed. He found her attractive, I could tell. I'm speaking like Master Yoda, I know. Because I'm a Red Indian. Three soldiers emerged from behind the Block A building. There were two females and one male. The female with the shotgun I wanted saw Josh's dropped jaw and retarded look, and she giggled. The man went forward and introduced himself, "Joe Dimizzy, 2nd Lieutenant, 27th Infantry Brigade. We're all that's left of it." Josh quickly snapped out of his daze and asked, "What happened to the rest?" The girl Josh fancied chipped in, "Sophie Lawson, 4th Chief Warrant Officer. There was major battle in the fields stretching all the way to the woods. We were sent as reinforcements, but got diverted here." The last girl introduced herself as Taylor Johnson, 5th Chief Warrant Officer. We introduced ourselves and head out to the fields. (Nana's gonna meet Qin here!)
     
  6. lol at joe XD
     
  7. good story man i filled the paper so i can get in the story 
     
  8. Psst post on the comment thread you're interrupting my reading.
     
  9. Come on Josh continue
     
  10. JOSHY CONTINUE....NOW!
     
  11. Yes continue the story
     
  12. LOL Ok. And Naomi I hope it's ok with you coz I was following your story layout... :D
     
  13. The team escaped the army compound which was now nothing but a large pile of dirt, rubble and debris. They followed a long dirt road down. The could see smoke coming from up ahead, and hurried their pace. Their comrades needed their help. They jogged, but at a slow pace as they were all weary and tired, partly from the heavy loads on their backs. Soon the found themselves on a high ridge, and below them, was a battle so fierce and ferocious even the toughest of veterans would wince at it's mention.
     
  14. Chapter 4: The Killing Fields

    The worst ever battlefield: grassy terrain. And this was where the battle was. Below them was the battle Sophie had mentioned. It was a losing cause. One by one they saw lives lost, and Death was victorious. They could feel its presence. It was, after all, all around them. Josh laid the General down and shouted over to Griffindoor over the overpowering artillery fire, "Stay here and protect him! We'll come back!" With that, everyone slid down the ridge and into the middle of the crossfire...
     
  15. Nice stuff Josh!!
    Yeah copy as much as you want.
     
  16. Naomi

    I slid down with the rest of the squad, but, surprise surprise, an off-target artillery shell exploded a few yards on the left of me, flinging me totally off course, and right into the heart of the enemy platoons. I reached under my shirt and whipped out my Desert Eagles. As soon as I was close enough, I started firing, emptying magazine after magazine. And when I landed at the end of the ridge, I slid my knives out. Charging Towards the rebels, I sliced my knife without hesitation, and was relentless. Rebels fell one after another, blood splitting out from wounds all over their body. That was when mortars started exploding all around me. That was when I realized they didn't know I was in here. That was when a mortar exploded behind me. That was when I blacked out.
     
  17. Nana

    I slid managed to stay on course with Josh and Danzo all the way down. We reached the bottom, the three of U's immediately 'dolphin dived' to cover which took the form of piled up sandbags. I looked up and found the most beautiful person I ever knew looking down awkwardly at me. "What are you doing here? Qin! I allowed you to join the army as a HQ girl! Not someone on the frontlines! You could get killed!" Qin retorted, " Shut up idiot!", with a smile. "I can't believe I'm gonna give in to you again!" I was smiling now. Josh shouted over to me, "Nana! Got over your love fest! Get your head in the battle!" I muttered under my breath "As if you didn't have one earlier." "I heard that!" came Josh's voice. I push myself up and crouched next to Qin. "Ready babe?" "Hell yeah!" We took aim and fired, round after round...