His Life... in My Hands

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CallMeNoona, Dec 10, 2011.

  1. After a long emotional hug from my mother she had the cab drive her back to the airport to go back home. I was left by myself to find my way around the LaCross Academy campus. I took out my schedule and a map of the school that I had found in Carter's room and looked at it.

    "Damn it..." I whispered. "I'm never going to find my way around this stupid place?"

    "Hey! What's wrong?"

    I turned to see a tall and lean man. He had black hair and dark eyes. His uniform was untidy and his tie hung loose around his neck. He looked curiously at me then frowned. He had a very thick British accent which made me smile when he spoke.

    "You new here?" he asked.

    "Yes. I transferred here today. I've never been to England or this school before so I have no idea where I'm going," I said quietly.

    "Hmm... I thought you weren't from here. You have a thick accent... American?"

    "Yes. I'm from Virginia."

    "Ahh... I'm guessing your an honorary scholarship student then? I mean to be going to a prestigious school like this. I bet this is your first time at and all-boys school."

    I frowned. "Yes I'm a scholarship student. And yes this is my first time at an all-boys academy..."

    "Haha, knew it! We normally don't have students transferring four months into the school year", he said smiling. "You must be really smart then."

    I blushed. "I wouldn't call myself smart..."

    He grinned and ignored my last statement. "I'm Kyle, by the way. Kyle Vandercruz and I'm eighteen and a senior here."

    "I'm Jani...er."

    "Junear?" he asked confused.

    "C-Carter Hrydranzo. I'm fifteen and freshman at this school," I said with a sigh.

    "Oh that's cool," he said. "Well I gotta go to class."

    "Oh... okay."

    He started walking away but then smiled and came back over to me and took my schedule and map out of my hands. He pointed to a spot on the map.

    "You have physics in this building here, room eighty four with Mr.Marcato. He's a good teacher. Well anyways, have a good day," he said and he waved goodbye.

    "Yeah bye", I said and I waved back. I watched him as he left and my heart felt a shock of electricity. I quickly looked away. Finding a love at this school wasn't ever going to happen... It was just going to be impossible.

    "This sucks..." I mumbled and I made my way to class. There were so many guys it was awkward.

    "Sorry!" said a guy when he accidentally bumped into me.

    "Ouch..." I muttered as I rubbed my arm.

    I watched as he blushed

    "A-Are you a guy?!" he asked. He stared intensely at me. "You don't look like a..." he blushed even more.

    "I'm a guy!" I shouted. At that second I thought he might've been able to see through my disguise.

    "I-I'm sorry! You're just very feminine looking then! I mean... Ahh..."

    I smiled. This guy didn't know. This guy was just stupid.

    "I'm Carter. Carter Hydranzo," I said.

    "Dustin Greave," he said back. "Well I have to get going! I hope to see you later!"

    "Sure..." I said and I watched him leave. He was like a little kid... Cute.
     
  2. bump! ii like it  sad she can never get a boyfriend tho lol


     
  3. Bump!! So cute 
     
  4. I like it :D
     
  5. Nice one. Bump! :cool:
     
  6. THIS IS AWESOME. BUUUMMMPPP!!!
     
  7. Bump! I love it
     
  8. The first half of the day was horrible! I hated being a girl in an all boys academy! They were all rude and gross and tried to get me to join in their perverted conversations about women and sex.

    "Shut up!" I said to one guy after he dissed his girlfriend and told everyone about his sleeping with many other girls during the relationship. "Just shut the hell up!"

    "You wanna go?!" he asked and he pushed me against the locker.

    "Ouch..."

    He laughed. "You little weakling! Imma gonna kick your little shit ass back to your fat bitch mother!"

    "At least I don't fuck my mother and everyone else I know," I said.

    "What did you say?!"

    I had regretted what I had said entirely, this guy could beat the crap out of me! Maybe even expose me as a girl in front of everyone!

    He came over to me and sent a hard punch to my gut making me fall to the ground where he kicked my face. My lip began to bleed and I was in too much pain to cry.

    "Hey!"

    I looked up to see a dark haired guy with short tousled hair and dark eyes. He punched the guys face and kicked him in the private area.

    "Cale. Leave the freshman alone. He didn't hurt anybody."

    The guy... Cale nodded before he ran off with his buddies behind him. I watched them leave.

    "Um... thank you," I said quietly

    "Sure," said the dark haired guy. "You know. You'll get kicked out of school if you continue to fight. Besides it's not attractive to fight in school either," he said and he brushed past me.

    "Wait! What's your name?" I asked.

    He turned around.

    "James. James
     
  9. No audition but I'm still here MUAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA
     
  10. It cut me off! 

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    "James. James Renfield," he said and he walked away.

    I blushed.

    "It was nice to meet you..." I whispered.

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    Also I'm making some changes! Kyle has blonde hair and blue eyes! And James is the one with dark hair and dark eyes! 
     
  11. Yep that's totally me
     
  12. I couldn't come up with a different name other than James.... and this is one of my best friend's name too! 
     
  13. But dark hair dark eyes Idk if he's tall though
     
  14. He is tall... mmm I'll say he's 6'2" and lean.... that's what the guy I like looks like.... 