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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *TaylorrLovesYou (01), Feb 16, 2012.

  1. Okay, so I just re-read my own damn story cause even I have no idea whats happening. But i think I got it. If you see a mistake, or something that's wrong, let me know please!
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    ()()()()()()()()Nicole's Point of View()()()()()()
    We got back to Cayden's house and were greeter by a beaming Aunt Crissy.
    "Hey you two! I was wondering when yall were going to be home. How was dinner? Did y'all have fun?" She looked back and fourth between Cayd and I.
    "Haha, yes Aunt Crissy. Dinner was devine, I saw Bree also. We ran by Walmart and got some popcorn, a movie, and Gatorade. Is it okay if Nicole stays again?" He chuckled to himself and asked.
    "That's lovely! And why of course she can, little Snickers is always welcome in this house. You two be responsible now though, I don't think I could handle a new born!" She laughed then went into her bedroom.
    Children. The though still lingered in my mind...
    "Race ya upstairs!" Cayd yelled and bounded up the staircase, I followed behind him quickly.
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    So I don't know how this story's going to work out.. I'll try. That is, if I have readers. Tell me what you think?
     
  2. You still have me!:) and I love it as always darling and my tiger likes it too lovely job as always
     
  3. Will it work?
     
  4. Will what work, Cheryy?
     
  5. Don't forget to read Start of Something Good by HollyS!
     
  6. I love this! Just read it all! Bumpdate!
     
  7. Anyone want an update?
     
  8. Yes taylor
     
  9. Yes!!!!! UPDATE!!!!
     
  10. Rainbow Bump!!!!!!!
     
  11. Rainbow Bump!!!!!!!
     
  12. How do you do rainbow?
     
  13. [color=red green]Rainbow[/color]