No but just tell me wht happens and I'll write it.Just tell me.For example: Sally forgives Jesse. Josh is over with Sally and is dating Jesse. Sam hates Sally. Sam hates Josh and Jesse. Just tell me Whts happens in one sentence or two
At lunch,Jesse pretended to laugh at Sally but she ignored her.Sally sat down at their table and Josh joined her. "Hey Sal." Sally turned around and saw Sam and James. "Hey Sam ad James." "Can we sit with you guys?" "Sure." Sally scooted over and Sam ad James sat down. "I heard about Jesse hearing u say,'I need glasses.'"James said. "James!"Sam was angry.She told him not to say it anymore. "Its okay Sam." Sally laughed. After lunch,Sam told James to go with Sally and Josh. "But why?" "Jesse and I got a business to do." "Okay then." James walked away and Sam looked for Jesse.Jesse was in the bathroom putting make-up. "Um.Hi?" "Heard bout u and Sally." Sam came closer to Jesse and she turned around. "So?It's not big deal!" "Really?" "Duh?" "Okay.Well I got business to do with u!" Sam slapped her and Jesse was about to cry. "Mess with Sally again,and your toast." Sam walked away from the bathroom. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sorry I didn't put the friend thing!Sally and Sam were already friends!
Sam saw Sally,Josh,and James sitting on a bench talking and laughing.James saw Sam. "Be right back guys." James stood up and was going to Sam's direction. "Hey.So what did u do with Jess?" "Eh,nothing.Let's go." Sam reached for James's hand.She grinned. Sally and Josh "So.." Sally looked at Josh and laughed. "What?" "Nothing."She laughed again because Sam was making a funny face on top of Josh's head.Josh turned around and saw Sam. "What were u doing?" Sam laughed with Sally and said,"Nothing." The bell rang. "We better go!" "Yes we do!"Sally was laughing.They ran until they were inside their class. The teacher saw Sally running. "No running please!" "Sorry!" Sally bumped into Jesse. "I'm really sorry Sally.Maybe u better watch out next time!" Sally ignored her as she bumped again to Jesse and so she fell down.(Jesse fell down) "Losers!" Sam stopped and went backwards angry. "What did u say?" Jesse was scared. "Uh..Nothing."Jesse tried to smile. "Maybe u better watch out next time!" Sam ran back to where Sally,Josh,and James were.Sally was proud. "Good job Sam!"Sally high-fived Sam. "Thanks Sally!" Sam grinned and then ran again.
Justin, using "u" and "r" to write a story proves how much you don't care. Guys, instead of telling him it's flawless, show some care and help the author. This story needs more adjectives and longer sentences, and there's always a space after the puncuation...