Tht was what Dolph was talkin about. Stop saying to let this go and calling yourself a loser. Do what Alida says and your story would be awesome. She has the guide to a good story.
(but I'm not trying to b mean) yr story MIGHT not improve much with Alida even though she has good tips. Cuz the way you write, with all that like because becomes cuz without a 'cuz is wrong.
Ik ur age..and Justin, I'm way younger then u but I don't call myself a loser and copy others stories