Well I guess you can have that character but I honestly like totally made her up. Her name WAS gonna be Lizzie but that didn't sound like it belong to a meanie
Ale picked up her phone and rested it between her shoulder and ear. "hey girl, what's new?" Jordan laughed."you will not guess. This ghost is a highschool popular wannabee." ale Smirked."very original." Jordan smiled, though ale couldn't see it."look up information about Danielle rivers and any family, okay?" ale nodded"got it chief! Call you in a hour." Jordan said okay and they hung up. Ale typed in Danielle Rivers and a a bunch if links popped up. She clicked the first link. Danielle Rivers was a 15 year old prodigy. She excelled in her learnings and skipped the ninth grade. She was best friend with the popular kids and also the less popular ones. "she was so well rounded!" her mother exclamied. Danielle was found in alley, naked and bruised, with a slit throat. Police think that she was kidnapped and raped, then killed. They know that she was the victim of a cruel initiation by her friends. "we didn't know that she would die!" friend Halley exclaimed. Danielle was found with a high level of alcohol in he system. After her death, her parents, May and George Rivers, left to go live with family. Danielles older sister Sami was finishing her last year in detective training. Where she goes next is unknown. Danielles funeral will be next week on friday at 5 o'clock. "no way!" ale said reaching for her phone and dialing Jordan's number. "Jordan! I dint know why you aren't pickin up but get this! Sami is related to Danielle! Their sisters!" it was then when someone put their hand around ales mouth. Ale struggled And elbowed the person. "what are you doing!" ale screamed. Then there was a oof and it went silent. The person then grabbed the phone."666 Gate Road, catch me if you can *****" and pressed the off button
Jordan press 1 on her phone to hear the message again, her whole body shaking. Ale was her best friend and the idea of her dead was a Nightmare. "666 gate road" the voice said. That's where ale was. That's where this would all end. --------------------------------------------- Halley laid in fetal position on her bed and had been that way since she's gotten home 3 hours ago. She ignored her moms pleas for her to talk and jennie phone calls. Oh Jenny. Deep inside she knew this was her fault. It was her dumb idea to send Danielle on that wild initiation. She just wanted to torture danielle for whatever reason. She also knew that it was Danielle killing them all. She should have told someone but the fear of what could happen got to her. What if she got locked up in the nut house? She was going through all the posabilites in her head when her phone buzzed. To: hothalley; kandykay From: J-wowzers Help me plz! At 666 gate road. It dani. Come asap. Halley got up and grabbed her keys, phone, and wallet. This time she'll set things straight. ------------------------------------------------ Kaylee looked at the message and swallowed. 666 gate road. She knew where that was, a block away from her house.she put on her shoes and was about to leave when she heard a door open. CJ, her little brother who stayed home from school due to the flu, stood in the hallway. "Kay... Where are you goin?" he said sleepily. Kay smiled with tears in her eyes and went over and hugged him. "just to check something out honey! I love you." Kaylee said rubbing his soft brown hair."now go back to bed!" CJ looked at kaylee with love in his big eyes and nodded."I love you too sissy." and he went to his room. Kaylee slowly got up and wiped her eyes, wondering if she'll ever see him again. She shook her head of the thought. Jenny needed her. She took a deep breath and got ready to face the beginning of the end.
Make sure you read the part above!! Jordan stared at the building and reached for the door. Locked. She looked at her watch. It was getting late. She tightened her jacket around her and wished she would have bought a thicker one. She looked at the warehouse door as it would magically unlocked. Which it didn't. Jordan leaned against the door, her mind racing with possiblities. It was then when she heard her name be called. Jordan saw kaylee run towards her and Jordan took a couple steps towards her. "I'm assuming your here for Jenny?" she asked the breathless girl. Kaylee nodded and showed Jordan the email. Jordan tugged at her ponytail when a car pulled up. They both watched as Halley got out and walked towards them."email" she explained and kaylee nodded. "voicemail for me." Jordan explained. They stood there for a second as Jordan explained the locked door problem. The kaylee spoke up. "how about the alley? There might be a door there!" the trio agreed and walked around. The alley was cold and cramped, leaving a suffocating feeling inthe air. Jordan ran her hand across the wall and frowned. No door.she was about to explain this when some one spoke."came to die?" Jordan took a sharp breath and turned around."Danielle."
Not very good. I had the passage more detailed but I accidentally erased it while editing...and there's no frekin undo button on here!!
Danielle was beautifully translucent and equally horrifying. Her throat was slit and she had many bruises. "Danielle.where's Jenny?"halley said trying to be brave. Danielle smiled."no 'hi Danielle,how's death?'. Well it doesn't matter, cause you'll be with Jenny soon. 6 feet under that is." "NO!!"kaylee screamed and fell to the ground. Danielle simply smiled."it was her turn to go." Halley remained stone faced."I dont believe you." danielle snapped her fingers and sami came out and threw a body on the ground. Jenny's body was pale and her once beautiful eyes stared into halleys. Kaylee screamed and Halley took a step back."what about the email?!" danielle pointed to Sami."big sis always did the clean work." and smiled at her older sister, who smiled back. Jordan's eyes opened with disbelief."Sami? Why!?" Sami glared at Jordan."they took her away." "but Sami,that's no reason to kill children!" Jordan protested. Samis fist tightened."why?they had no problem killing her!!" Jordan took a deep breath."Sami.where is ale?"
Sami Smirked and reached behind her to pull out a squirming ale. Ales mouth was duct taped and and her hands were tied. Her legs were bent at a akward angle. "oh ale!" Jordan cried as she reached for her. She started to take the tape off when Sami gave a sharp kick to Jordan's side. "its time to die." Danielle said as she started to glow. "BUT WHY?!" Halley cried."why Danielle?" Danielle looked annoyed."because. You took my life by a dumb prank, now I'm going to take yours , in the same alley , at the same time." Halley started to cry as Danielle grew brighter. It suddenly kicked in both Jordan's and halleys heads, danielle was a floating bomb. "bye bye!" Sami smiled. "NO!"Halley yelled as she grabbed kaylee and threw her away."RUN KAY!" Kaylee cried and got up and ran. Jordan jumped on top of ale to protect her when Danielle exploded. Finale tomorrow! Or tonight if your lucky!