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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *leeleecruz (01), Jul 26, 2011.

  1. Wow, I love murder mysteries; this is really good!
     
  2. Hehe. This is awesome
     
  3. Jenny walked the streets alone. She was excused from school and Halley and kaylee were too shaken up to speak to her. A stick snapped and Jenny screamed. Then a squirrel ran across her path. " calm down Jenny. Your getting to worked up over nothing." she said rubbin her arms. It was the end of July and super hot out, so why was she cold? She kept on walking and was able to see her house now. She let out a sigh of relief when she heard footsteps matching her own. They were heavier and seemed to speed up. She started to run and didn't dare to turn around. She reAched the intersection that was near her house and saw a car. She ran towards it screaming. The man behind the wheel stopped and gave her a weird look."whats up kid?" Jenny huffed." some ones following me." the man looked behind her and laughed. " very scary." jenny turned around too see a young kid on a tricycle. While she was turned around, the car screeched off. Jenny turned around and screamed at it."come back!" when a hand with a tissue covered her mouth. "take a nice nap sweetheart"
     
  4. I bet it's sally
     
  5. Whoaa
    More!!!!
     
  6. Wow awesome!!! Love it
     
  7. "how could this happen?" Jordan said frustrated to Ale and Sami. Ale shook her head sadly." I don't know." Jordan sat down in the principals plush chair and reran the meetings event in her head. Jenny's confession really shook the room. The two other girls were shaken so badly that they went home early. Jennys parents couldn't pick her up so she was excused from her classes to go home. She was to report to the school as soon as she got home. Jordan looked at the clocked and stood up.Jenny left over two hours ago and only lived a block away."dammit. We should have gone with her." she said as she grabbed her coat an started to leave with Ale and Sami...wait. Where was Sami? "Ale?where is Sami at?" Ale looked around and shrugged when her face suddenly lit up."she went to get a drink." Jordan raised a eyebrow."and how long ago was that?" ale's face fell."Two hours ago dammit!" Jordan went into detective Mode. "ale. Go and get every bit of information you can about Sami. I'm going to go look for Jordan."
     
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  9. Haha I'm guessing you like
     
  10. Jordan knocked on the door and sit immeaditly opened, revealing a woman who looked just like Jenny. Or Jenny looked like the woman. Jordan must have had a surprise look on her face cause the woman smiled. "I'm sorry, I was waiting for my daughter Jenny. I'm her mother, Liz." Jordan put a hand on the door."you mean she's not here yet?" Liz nodded."I think shes just mourning the death of her friends. I mean it hasn't even been a year since Danielle died." Jordan's eyes widened. "wait. Who was Danielle?" Liz looked very solemn and forced a smile."why don't you come in dear?"
     
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  12. "the one in the middle" Liz pointed to a tall but pretty young lady. She had wild red hair and lots of freckles but it worked for her. You could tell through the picture that she was a awkward child."so ma'am, what happened
    To her?" I asked Liz. Liz cleared her throat and swallowed."well you see my baby and her friends, their quite popular. And you know how kids are nowadays with their crazy Clubs and rituals. They had a initation that they all apparently went through. They got danielle drunk and had her find her way home in the middle of the night and-"liz was sobbing now and Jordan moved to rub her back."please go on ma'am." Liz nodded and took a deep breath."Danielle was kidnapped and raped. The police found her naked and bruised with her throat slit in a alley. Oh.. Her family was devastated and as soon as the funeral was over, they left. My baby and her friends were in trial was careless manslaughter but since they were minors, they got away with community service. My baby was never the same after that." Jordans mind raced. The cases were all at night and their throats were slit. Same as Danielle. "ma'am, we have reason to believe that whatever is causing these deaths might be after your daughter." Liz's eyes bugged out."NOT MY BABY!" Jordan made hush noises. "you need to help me now. What was danielles last name?" Liz choked."rivers! Danielle Rivers!"
     
  13. Oooooh!!! I want MORE
     
  14. Alrite, why was I blamed? 
     
  15. What character are you?
     
  16. I was Sally. Why did bearny in the earlier pages blame me.
     
  17. Did you sign up for Sally? I thought I made her up
     
  18. Yeah, Sally chan was my signup. I'm pretty obnoxious,you nailed that!