Heaven or Hell

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *FashionablyOnTime (01), Dec 11, 2011.






  1. . Whts so great about tht?
     
  2. Man I just wanted to write a story
     
  3. She's writing a story thts not that bad u don't have to hate it
     
  4. How am I hating it if I don't read it
     
  5. Your not hating it your hating on it I mean look winners won't always win losers won't always lose but the thing is haters will always hate so don't become a hater
     
  6. Hey Justin go shove it if you don't like my story
     
  7. Even you didn't read it why post here? Go awayDun clog up the thread!
     
  8. I tried to talk to Elle but she went away when she saw Stephanie. So I went to the park all the boys looked at me because aparently I'm a hottie. I don't know I don't plan on dating right now. Stephanie wants to meet her father some day. I asked her if she blamed me for what happened she immediatly said no. Then I set her down for a nap Oh no you won't believe who is coming up to me uh oh *starts to run*
     
  9. Now I need to know who it is
     
  10. Dude he was like how could she be talking when dead.

    1. Um it's fiction she can be an angel and tall there only too angels.

    2. Why would he know there dead if he didn't read it he obviously did.
     
  11. BTW Im 16 and I died in a motorbike accident (I'm a risktaker)
     
  12. Justin, go plank in the middle of a highway! 
     
  13. Yeah Elle I know I'm trying to create some mystery with your character
     
  14. I'll update soon I feel the beggining Is the only part I truly excelled what you guys think if I need to try harder I will.
     
  15. Please save us by updating.
     
  16. *tries to run faster but trips* He grabbed me by my hair and snatched me to my feet still tugging my hair. Then a blurred figure came through the air and kicked him in the face then landed to it's feet with a crash. It was.... ELLE then all of the sudden Dolph and Danny came over. I pulled Stephanie and screamed at him THIS IS OUR DEAD BABY GIRL THAT YOU KILLED!! He flinched back from my wrath he tried to pick Stephanie but then I punched him in the face he fell to the ground. His name is Jace Cory Bell so horrible. He turned and walked away I through a large rock and hit him in the head he fell I screamed HOW DOES IT FEEL! Dolph Danny and Elle all had to hold me back from beating the crap out of him. He ran off and Stephanie had gone back to sleep... Life was a whole lot harder now.
     
  17. Cliffhangerbump