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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *LilySnape (01), Feb 5, 2012.
Kat: What's happening!? -grips her hammer-
MOVE POTER - I shove him out the way -
Harry p: *opens the door* EVERYONE OUT!
*still passed out* ()
- turns and whispers - potter it's the Mark
"MINISTER!" -Pulls up my sleeve revealing the dark mark- "I'm calling him!"
Kat: Why!?
Harry P: he's already here!
(whom? )
Ok lily - holds the dark Mark -
Harry P: I SAID EVERYONE OUT! Me: *passes out as loads of students run out of the train*
(now that's two people unconscious Tom and Veronica )
Kat: -runs over to lily- lils what's happening?
-Looks at Lily with wide eyes-
- looks at the students and creates red sparks - STUDENTS MOVE NOW
(BACK!)
MOVE NOW STUDENTS -
*rolls under the seat groaning*
"DAD!" -Presses my wand to my dark mark-
Lord - bows and looks at voldermort -