Harry Potter and the Vampire

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *NataliaArlovskaya (01), Jul 21, 2011.

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  1. ch3
    the cashier told them he was a vampire and he started drinking hermoines blood and harry trys to stop him but he cant so then hermione passes out frum blood loss and the vampire says "not a nice gf now is she? be good or youll be next, k?" but harry just nodded.

    to be continued
     
    #21 *NataliaArlovskaya (01), Jul 22, 2011
  2. Lmfao rlly bad no detail at all
     
    #22 *Da_Wolf63 (01), Jul 22, 2011
  3.  This absoutlely horrible. Just terrible. 
     
    #23 *_NicoleTheShortie_ (01), Jul 22, 2011
  4. Omg. You are ruining my pleasure of literature.
     
    #24 *CheekyChloe (01), Jul 22, 2011
  5. Well I wrote a story but gave up mine at least had some good comments tho I stopped cuz not tht many ppl read it
    P.S. I only wrote tht cuz he told me to write a better story
     
    #25 *Da_Wolf63 (01), Jul 22, 2011
  6. This not tht*
     
    #26 *Da_Wolf63 (01), Jul 22, 2011
  7. ch4
    harry was scared of the man but whn hermione woke up he was vey happy an stuff. hermione lost so much blod she couldnt remeber wat had happnd. "what was tht?" she asked hrry when she woke up. "i dont know but i though he killd you" he said bak. thy started a plan to escpe but then they herd footsteps...


    To be continued
     
    #27 *NataliaArlovskaya (01), Jul 22, 2011
  8. Stfu!!! OMG
     
    #28 *CheekyChloe (01), Jul 22, 2011
  9. Yea I told a mod tht how bypassed on pg. 2 by taking the c out of the f word
     
    #29 *Da_Wolf63 (01), Jul 22, 2011
  10. guyz just stop posting here i hav other plans 4 this
     
    #30 *NataliaArlovskaya (01), Jul 22, 2011
  11. Thank you!!!!!!
     
    #31 *CheekyChloe (01), Jul 22, 2011
  12. Alright bye
     
    #32 *Da_Wolf63 (01), Jul 22, 2011
  13.  this story seems to be written by a 5 yearold for a homework 
     
    #33 Hill_, Jul 22, 2011
  14. hill dont hate ur just jelly
     
    #34 *NataliaArlovskaya (01), Jul 22, 2011
  15.  I'm jelly? Of you??  look kiddo look, go to the real world and show people this story an you'll see that you'll ruin there love for literature...  I can't stand the way you write it's so noobish!
     
    #35 Hill_, Jul 22, 2011
  16. im sory im gong to link my ipod and comp and retype it with bettr grammer
     
    #36 *NataliaArlovskaya (01), Jul 22, 2011
  17. Teetaa! Roll down the hill! He's right! Not even da best can teach you how to dougie! And kid, 18 for this game.
     
    #37 *CheekyChloe (01), Jul 22, 2011
  18. Atlast... Just a tip... More detail... That will help you more
     
    #38 Hill_, Jul 22, 2011
  19. cheky its not lik any1 cares
     
    #39 *NataliaArlovskaya (01), Jul 22, 2011
  20. do you speak ze english?
     
    #40 *Mister_Eagle (01), Jul 22, 2011
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