Halloween Suprise!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *UltraViolet_ (01), Aug 9, 2011.

  1. "thank you."



    "no problem. Do you want to go out later?"

    "I think I'm fine. Here."

    She handed him a piece of paper.

    "what is this?"

    "talk to you later charming!" she yelled from the door. Who was she? Why is she here? Is it possible that she can help? These are all questions shadow was unable to answer.

    He had decided to follow her instead. But the plan backfired. He tripped on a stone a fell. She turned around and a ball of black energy appeared out of her Hand pointing at him.

    " what do you want?!" she yelled getting closer.

    He stood up and grabbed her hand and the energy was gone. He swooped her up and started to run. She folded her arms." who the hell do you think you are?"

    He stopped and put her down and held her.

    " what the Fu-!"

    " amber,just ten minutes ago I got you out of a bar and saved you. Now what on earth do you think I am doing?"

    " I DON'T KNOW!" she roared and suddenly her hair turned blonde. Ah raging amber. Her super form.

    She started throwing punches and it surprised shadow she had such a temper...
     
  2. He grabbed her arms and she calmed down.

    " I'm doing this to protect you. Now just tell me why you Did this to me..."

    "did what? Almost kill you? Oh because you weren't listening!"

    " no.. That's not it. You charmed me. How?"

    "what? Weird. Read the paper when you get home and call! Bye!" she yelled running.



    : LATER AT AMBERS HOUSE:

    RING!

    "hi amber."

    "hello shadow. What do you want?"

    " the truth."

    "of what?"

    "I know you like me amber. I'm not stupid."

    "it's pretty obvious you like me shadow."

    " I'll find you,don't think I won't."

    "why when you can follow me home. Oh yeah, you failed doing that, DUH!"

    " why you-"

    "listen. If I let you stay will you do that again."

    "yeah bu-"

    "perfect! See you later!" was the last thing she said.

    What does he want? How does he know? Did she make it too obvious? Was she not hiding it well enough?
     
  3. :THE BAR WITH SHADOW:

    She stepped into the bar showing her teeth to Bark. Bark grabbed her tail and laughed.

    " What are you doing?" she asked folding her arms.

    "I don't know.... Why don't you tell me?" he said getting closer to her body.

    " oh my God!" she yelled.

    Shadow walked in and pulled out his gun and held it to barks head.

    "ready to commit your own foolishness by messing with her?" he snickered.

    " Sh-Shadow..." stuttered amber.
    Bark squeezed her tail and that was the end.

    Black matter surrounded Ambers body. Her eyes turned black, her claws appeared and she had black balls of energy coming out surrounding bark. Shadow stood by her. She spun and slashed but missed by a few inches.

    " LEAVE ME ALONE DAMNIT!!!" she yelled. Bark ran out. The dark version of amber ended and collapsed.

    "Sh-Shadow...." he looked down at her and helped her up as she breathed. "thank you....."
     
  4. Shadow took her hand and took her outside. She smiled as it started to rain.

    :JOURNY TO AMBERS HOUSE:

    He walked behind her and watched her move her hips from side to side. She was dripping wet and she dropped something.

    They both reached for it and stood up. "here." he said handing her the small bow that fell out of her hair.

    She giggled and looked away swishing her tail and teasing shadow. "thank you shadow."

    "for what? I didnt do anything."

    "you saved me when I hit the floor remember?" her green eyes sparkled under the moon in shadows arms. She looked up.
     
  5. "yes but.... What are you denying?" he asked looking into her green sparkling eyes.

    "love... It's inconceivable.... Don't doubt it." she said wrapping her tail around shadow.

    She grabbed his hand and started to run" we are going to my house tonight!" she giggled. When they got there shadow waited behind her when she dropped her keys" WOOPS!" she giggled as she bent down.

    She unlocked the door and lead them inside. She sighed.

    "amber?" shadow asked, holding a blue sapphire chaos emerald.

    "yeah?" she said turning around.

    " why do you have this?"

    "chaos control."

    "with one?"
    "yup."

    He sat down and waited for her. She sat down with him.

    "what's wrong shadow?" asked amber,twirling her hair.
     
  6. I love this!!
     
  7. Awesome
     
  8. Thank you! You will be apart of my great big family. I will follow you... Lol-Ms.M
     
  9. " nothing." he said without looking up.

    She touched his face.

    "Amber?" he asked.

    "yeah shadow?" she answered from his side.

    "D-Do you love me?"

    She giggled and laughed. "why wouldn't I?" she said getting closer to shadow.

    " Whoa there amber! Don't go to far."

    She laughed and sprung up. She walked around went upstairs laughing" can't catch me shadow!" and she ran into her room.

    In the closet she could her his footsteps... He opened the door and she fell."whoa!" they both called. Amber propped herself up,still on shadows body.

    She glowed red and flashed her tail....
     
  10. " Oh my! I'm sooo sorry shadow!" she said as she got herself up and helped him up.

    She looked away, wondering if he really loved her.

    "amber?"
    "yes shadow?"

    "come here."
    She walked quietly and sat beside him. " Sh-Shadow?"

    "yeah amber?" he said touching Ambers waist.
    " what do you want to do?" she said,hoping her heartbeat wouldn't be loud as she drew closer to shadow.

    He looked down and grabbed her hand. "I'll show you..."
     
  11. They walked outside and he pointed to the moon. On the grassy hill dh got an I idea that will get herself to kiss him!

    "come on shadow!".

    She Layed down next to him and off they went. She went tumbling and so did he, at the end they wound up on eachother, laughing. Ambers hair acted like a curtain, blocking from anybody that could see her being naughty.....


    That's the end! Well I'll let you choose! Sonics love next or knuckles love! I'll leave up to you!
     
  12. This...story...makes...no...sense...you...make...no...sense...you...should...stop...writing...I...tried...to...help...some...and..you..come...up...with this atrocity?!? *smh*
     
  13. Qin, give her some slack, it's funny
     
  14. It makes no sense -.- and it sucks ass she doesn't deserve slack -.-
     
  15. It's a bit of fun, come on
     
  16. You have a good taste my dear sitter for I shall write!



    :THE FOREST:

    Jaclyn rubbed her head walking through the forest. She was partnered in guarding the master emerald with and echidna named knuckles.

    "this place is so... Big." the last Tree had a sign pointed to the holder. She fixed her hair and hoped this was it. She ran to the alter of the Master Emerald and stopped and looked down.

    She walked around the sleeping echidna and walled up to the emerald. "wow... It's beautiful!" She got to her knees and tapped him.

    "wake up dork." she said. He sat up immediately and was being held by her throat.

    " What do think your doing little Missy?" He asked laughing.

    " Little? Why I outta!" she easily uppercut knuckles and he fell.
    " what do you want?"

    " im here to do the same as you. To protect the master emerald."

    " you look like a jewel thief to me." he said folding his arms.

    She kicked up and was pushed back leaving her mouth dripping with blood.

    " well, your knuckles alright." she stuck out a hand." I'm Jaclyn, Jaclyn the panda. Now the second guardian of the Master Emerald." "okay!" he said.


    She kissed his cheek. "what was that for?" he asked wide eyed.

    " nothing... TAG! your it!"she said giggling while running and knuckles jumped following her. She stopped, jumped up and flipped and landed on the alter. He watched her fast footwork.
    Then he noticed the two rings on each of her arms.

    " Jaclyn, you don't mind me asking, why do you have four rings?"

    "So I dont need to get rings to go into super form." she explained, getting closer to knuckles.
     
  17. 
     
  18. Could I be tails girl?!