Halloween Suprise!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *UltraViolet_ (01), Aug 9, 2011.

  1. Charmy smiled at her and turned to his window. Vector didn't want Janet to go. She was nice,pretty,and super sweet. He didn't care if she was a world class criminal. He wanted to be with her forever.
    "Espio,stop the car."
    Espio kept driving.
    "Espio! Stop the car!!!"
    He slammed on the brakes and they stopped. Vector grabbed Espio to speak to him outside.
    Janet was staring at charmy.
    "Vector we can't just say we got her then she dissapered."
    "Yes we can! I don't wa-"
    "Vector look. She likes you too but you need to understand that she is a Class A criminal."
    "She does?"
    "Yes! Good lord vector...."
    "I'm going to tell her I love her!"
    "You have 5 minutes vector." said Espio walking back to the car. Vector pulled Janet out of the car as she fought against him.
    "Hey!! Don't touch me! Wrong spot!!" she yelled as she pulled out her claws.
    "Janet,I-I..."
    "You what?"
    "I-I l-love....you."
    Janet smiled. She kissed his cheek and walked back to the car.
    "Maybe after I get out of prison." she winked.
    "I guess...."
    About four years later janets sentence was over.
    "Janet Burkes your free to go." said the officer.
    Who stood at the door made Janet happier than ever.
    Espio was keeping charmy still. Vector was crying. Charmy was waiting for her.
    "Hey guys!" she said waving.
    "JANET!!!" screamed charmy and vector. They gave her a big hug. She gave charmy a hug,and she kissed vector.

    "I love you vector."
    "Janet,I love you too."

    The end. Okay,this has Russians in this next story....
     
  2. -Working on update-
     
  3. Bump! Working on it now!
     
  4. Excuse my mistake;Italian... An Italian story.
    Shadow has had enough. Dealing with the moron;Sonic,He needed to calm down.
    "Russian roulette has a new dealer." snickered a stranger next to shadow while waiting for the casino to open.
    "What? What happened to Mac?!"
    "He retired I guess. A girl replaced him."
    The kind stranger pointed to the cat through the glass trying to fix the machine.
    She angrily spoke to the man helping her fix the machine.
    "Gianna,listen! Blue and green,not red." said the man talking to her. She pulled her ears back and growled.
    She looked frantically for the wire.
    "There is no damned green wire moron!"
    "Gianna! It's in front of you!"
    She screamed loudly in Italian.
    Shadow spun his head quickly to the window looking at the two yell at eachother.
    "30 more seconds...." mumbled shadow under his breath.
    Gianna stood at her post. The man had been wrong. The wasn't a green wire. It was yellow.
    "10...9....8...7..6...5...4...3.."
    mumbled the stranger.

    "Gianna,Open the doors please," asked Ginger; the whole ringleader of this circus.
    "Yes ma'am." responded Gianna.
    Gianna walked to the door and pulled out the key that was in her pocket. She slipped it into the doors lock and it clicked as she turned it.
    She flung the door open and put a stopper there.
    Shadow looked at Gianna. Her blue fur worked well with the white clothing. Her fingers ran over the switch of the machine.
    Shadow stepped in front of her and introduced himself.
    "I'm shadow,Your pretty miss;may I ask what your name is?" he said taking her hand.
    "G-Gianna...." she blurted out blushing red.
    "Ah,Gianna. Beautiful Italian name. You happen to be italian?" he asked pushing her blue bangs out of her eyes so he could see her eyes.
    "Yes..I'm italian. Excuse me....I have to go back to my post." she said quickly walking back with her hair shrouding her face once again.

    "She's mine..." said shadow as he grinned.

    She ran to the bathroom and splashed the ice cold water on her face. Gina tapped her and asked"Face on fire Gianna?"

    "You have no idea!" Cried Gianna.
    "Gianna you have some serious issues with guys around here." Mumbled Gina under her breath.
    "Don't get me started on how he was staring at me!" Yelled Gianna walking out the door and she ran her finger over the machines switch as she jumped over the counter.
    Shadow stared at her as she walked. Her white eyeshadow made her look like the most amazing thing. An Ice Angel is what he liked to call her. The beauty he could not describe was something he couldn't get away from.

    "Gianna...." whispered shadow touching her side as she tried concentrating on the game. But she couldn't. She was giggling as if she was in a psycho ward.

    "Shadow,Stop it." she said declaring and showing she wasn't being hard enough on her commands.
    "Gianna gianna...."
    Her face blew up a dark red color.
    "What's wrong Gianna? Cat got your tongue?"
    "No it's just I'm trying to concentrate,your not helping. Making it waayyy worse." she said struggling not to die of embarrassment.
     
  5. oh wow much better than mine and you said you couldn't write :eek: xx
     
  6. Whatchu talkin about? I just type. ._.
     
  7. *rolls eyes* you know what i mean haha... x
     
  8. Ima update soon doll!
     
  9. Editing and adding...
     
  10. "Come on Gianna,Nobody will know.." said shadow pressing her against the cement wall outside.
    "But what if they find out?..." she said trying not to be lured into his blood red eyes.
    He ran his finger down her chest and she swallowed hard pushing herself against the wall.
    "That,I will make sure never happens." he grinned.
    But sure enough,There was Jayden the hedgehog.
    "I'll see you inside my angel." winked shadow as he walked back inside.
    She slid to the ground,Pulling her black tee shirt down so it covered her panties.
    Jayden leaned on the wall and smiled.
    "Hey!"
    She looked sideways at him and panicked. She jumped up pulling her shirt down again.
    "I'm not going to hurt you...Calm it." he said standing infront of her.
    She put her hands on the back of her legs.
    "Okay....I trust you." purred the Italian accent she held.
    Jayden looked up her whole body.
    From head to tail to boot.
    He whistled and she immediately turned around.
    "I'm jayden!"
    "G-Gianna....."
    He put his hand out and pulled her up. Her tail went side to side as she thanked him. She scratched her ears and stuttered.
    "J-Jayden?"
    He turned around and looked at her. *She's so....Wow..*
    she kissed his cheek and he accidentally touched her.
    Her face was boiling.
    "D-Did you just touch m-my....bottom?" she said with her eyes wide as she looked at her bottom and back at jayden.
    "What?! no! I swear!" He yelled.
    "Okay,Well,Bye!" she waved as she marched back inside. Her hips taunted him saying "You can't touch me...."
    Shadow glared at jayden from the window.
    "What does that Jackass want from my Gianna?!"
    "He was cute...." mumbled Gianna thinking about Gianna.

    "Not again......" said jayden smacking his forehead.
    He truly felt something for Gianna. Her smile,Her eyes,her tail....
    It was something he couldn't get out of his mind.
    He had to talk to her. It was urgent.
    "Gianna,Who was that?" asked Versachi,Her best friend.
    "Oh,Jayden..."
    "He somebody "Special?" she giggled doing quotation marks over special to stress out the meaning in this case.
    "Hey! He isn't,I just met him today!"
    Versachi winked and went back to the bar and served drinks.
    Jayden leaned against a table and stared at her while she stared back blushing. She waved.
    *She's so pretty....I didn't do that on accident! It was my bad side...*
    "Hi Jayden!" she cried.
    Shadow had his brow raised while looking at jayden. Standing about four yards away stood disappointed shadow.
    Gianna giggled as she ran over to jayden and hugged him.
    "Hi gianna!"
    "JAYYYDEEENNNN!" she squealed loudly.
    Her tail moved excitedly from left to right.
    "With the taste of your lips I'm on a ride....." she said slyly moving behind him.
    "Your toxic I'm slipin under...." said jayden going with the song.....
    "Intoxicate me." she said standing in front of him.
    She dragged him along into a closet and shadow silently hid in the shadows while spying on them.
    She pinned him against a wall.
    "Do it. You poisoned me. Intoxicate me already."
    "H-how?..."
    She kissed him and held him. She moaned and he did right back.
    He stopped and let go of her.
    Her Black hair veiled her deviant mind and all.
    She leaned against the wall and put her hands on her legs.
    "What was that?!" said jayden responding to the bang on the door.
    "Nothing...The door seems to do that a lot nowadays.." she said getting closer again.
    Jayden couldn't take it. He grabbed Gianna and kissed her.
    "Jay-!"
    He Put his hands on her waist and she opened her eyes.
    "Back off or you will be sorry!" yelled shadow busting open the door.
    Will Jayden be Giannas lover or will he be toast?
     
  11. Answer the question, AND I SHALL COUNTINUES!
     
  12. Jayden shall be toast 
    Extra crispy brown with a side of jelly 
     
  13. Gianna screamed and fell to the floor. Jayden went to grab her but soon failed getting a gun held to his head.
    "What are You doing with a CRIMINAL?!" screamed shadow making her breakdown even harder.
    "I DIDN'T KNOW! J-JAYDEN?!"
    With jayden moving shadow kicked his ass well, and shot him and gave him to the police officer outside.
    "Shadow, how did you know-"
    "Gianna, you're going to my house. With me. NOW."
    He grabbed her and they walked home.
    Yes she was unbelievably pissed off.
     
  14. "If you just let me-"
    "NO!"
    Shadow threw her on his bed.
    "SHAD-" He grabbed her and kissed her.
    "Is that a good enough toxin?" he grinned.
    Her face was blown up red, and horribly orange.
    She moaned in which it sounded like a yes.
    She squirmed to move.
    "Shadow, Let go please.."
    "Gianna, I just want t-"
    She sat up, alarming shadow.
    "I have to go, I'm sorry." she got off the bed. "Im late for my shift."
    "Shift?"
    "At the strippers bar..."
    Shadow was surprised to hear that. He thought.
    *She won't recognize me when I come, MAYBE!*
    She walked out the door and slid down it moaning.
    "Why didn't I just stay?..."
    She stood up walking back to the casino.
    "Yo! GIANNA YOUR LATE FOR YOUR SHIFT!" yelled Vershachi.
    "I know!,"
    She took a sip of wine from the cup Versachi set on the table."Gianna, you are the biggest wine addict I know." she said laughing.
    "Hey, you crack jokes when you can't even spell when your texting me!"

    Should I finish this story or start up a new one? ._.
     
  15. OFFICIALLY CLOSED! 
     
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