Goodbye Cruel World

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by tash777, Jul 21, 2012.

  1. O_O No! I would NEVER post such an off topic subject in FF! 
     
  2. Guess who is writing an update!
     
  3. The chocolot bunny?
     
  4. (I was just worried tash I didn't want you doing something like that was all)
     
  5. I already covered that base DES.
     
  6. (/.-) I was writing an update... Until my mum took my iPod away so I would sleep.
     
  7. You could post this on wattpad! it's a online book app. It.is on Appstore and Playstore! I bet you could get like.. 300++ reads. Million's of people use wattpad!
     
  8. Thats where I posted mine!!
     
  9. I'm not sure... I posted this on KaW and people hated it. It's a delicate subject to write about, so I think this story better stay on here.

    Also, I just deleted half of the update. Yay me! -.-

    One more thing. This story is ending SOON. like next few updates soon.

    This isn't as depressing as the other things. I just wanted to say thanks to everyone who read this story.
    \(^.^)/ free hugs for all!
     
  10. Read mine! The End
     
  11. DONT EVER EVER EVER advertise on my threads. I will hunt you down and kill you in the most brutal way possible.
     
  12. Man, I wish you told me that before. But you still read it!
     
  13. OMAGAD AN UPDATE  but only a short one...

    Thursday

    I missed seeing her face. That was the only reason I was coming back to school. I was supposed to be back four days ago, but I saw no point in coming back. She didn't visit. Not once.

    8:30am

    The walk to school was lonely.
    Nobody bouncing up to me.
    Nobody ripping off my headphones. Just me.

    My first lesson was science. Chemistry to be exact. At least I got to sit next to her. A short woman with frizzy hair started explaining what we were supposed to do. The actual science teacher was on a school trip.

    I caught the words "experiment" and "partner". I stopped listening and turned to my right to see the person who would be doing all the work this lesson with a smirk.

    Only she wasn't there.

    That's strange. Was she sick? That would have explained why she didn't visit.

    The grin was quickly wiped off my face when I saw her in the seat next to Alex.

    I read the instructions on the board and started the experiment up when she wandered up to me.

    "Hey Dan. Sorry I didnt tell you I was gonna sit next to Alex earlier. I couldn't find you anywhere."

    "Were you even looking? I didn't go anywhere unusual. In fact, it's you that I couldn't find anywhere this morning."

    That came out a little harsher than I expected. Oh well. I wasn't in a kind mood today anyway.

    "Look, Dan, I'm really sorr-"

    "Sorry for what? Sorry that you prefer to spend time with your boyfriend than your loser of a friend? It's fine, I understand. Save your breath."

    Before she could respond, I grabbed a random chemical and poured almost the whole bottle of it into the solution we were given.

    The result created a little more than a mess. Well, it burnt a hole through the table. Surprisingly, all I got was detention.

    Apart from a painful glimpse of Becky and Alex kissing at lunch, he day passed in a blur of boredom. As usual. There was no art lesson today, so at home I found myself cutting intricate patterns into my arm. I could have used pencils and paper, but I would end up drawing the same thing I always do. I didn't want to think about her. Not right now.

    The next few weeks or so carried on like this, when one day, I realized something. Why am I living like this? There's no point. Nobody loves me. The one person I love is happy with someone else. Isn't that all that matters? That Rebecca is happy?

    Nobody loves me. Nobody needs me. I'm dead weight. Pointless.

    Why bother existing at all?
     
  14.  oh it's a lovely story too bad I have to start reading at the end. But anyways, BUMP
     
  15. I don't think the users on wattsapp will hate it. There lots of weird stories there, like boyxboy, teacherxstudent, girlxgirl, ghosts, fanfics, horror, anything. So I don't think people will hate it if you post it there. There are also professional writers there and you can learn more about writing from them. 
     
  16. Not sure where exactly I ended up on forum... Kinda like you tube but I just read this thing and it's very good not sure what bumping means and y everyone says it but keep going with the story please hopefully I can find it again.