god? no I'm quite the opposite

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by steelwolfe2, May 19, 2012.

  1. Shelby's Pov
    What was that it was loud everything is going black the demons let me go is that my blood the monster he has a gun oh I see he shot me tristan he's here two he's screaming I can see the tears running down his face "I'm so sorry tristan I love y..."

    Tristan's Pov
    No she can't be she's dead her last words what was she going to say no no she cat be dead it can't be true "she's dead Tristan give up" he dead this claw did this i will kill him

    Claw / the master's Pov
    He stopped crying what with his eyes his skin is ripping no no not that any thing but that

    Story Pov
    Tristan's skin rips apart giant black wings rip from it large horns rip out his head he rises from his skin the black scales gleaming in his body large claws and giant sharp fangs Tristan now stands at twenty feet long his fingers wrapped 6 inches in diameter his arm two feet his wings 50 feet at full length his fangs were 2 feet long and between his large horns there was a crown of fire
     
  2. Omg thts so sad!
     
  3. Tristans Pov
    "I am king of the underworld claw and you will pay" I roar into the air and claws troops ralley behind me they follow the king claw stand alone some master he was

    Story Pov
    Tristan grabs claw and crushes him in his hand claws eyes pop out hi brain explodes and Tristan roars drops claws mangled body claws body heals as is claws power but this only makes tristan happy Tristan gets to kill claw forever

    Tristan's Pov
    I sit on my throne in hell once more I wished when I got back I would see Shelby but she went to heaven. God hates me he took the women I love into his domain my minions torture claw day in and day out. But now I the man in the suit have set my sights on a new target I will take heaven and I will have my beloved back

    Story Pov
    Reveils Milloins of demons in front of Tristan's throne preparing for war



    THE END!!!!
     
  4. Will you write a second one about how he gets Shelby back?
     
  5. No I'm not writing a war with heaven
     
  6. On Friday there will be a new fan fiction from me
     
  7. I've decided to write part two for those of you who are interested it will come about sometime today or tomorrow
     
  8. I will be writing part two for those of you interested
     
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  10. I'm bumping this so people who want to read part two can read this one first