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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NeonQueen, Nov 27, 2011.
"That...JERK!" I say crying into carters shoulder.
Carter twitches his fox ears. 3 he looks like tails. :3)
"Hmm? Who's the jerk here?" I ask
-Carter mouths: David-
"Uh... Who's David?"
"David hurt her..." -He points to her back, it's a blackened burn-
Elijah: *sitting in his apartment, flipping through TV channels*
-She mews as he touches her back-
"Oh wow..."
"He...burned her.....)
"Why would her burn you?" (hay alida. I think we did a pretty good job scarring everyone for life)
*he Damn typo
() "He...was angry at me..." I say hiccuping holding Carter.
"What could you possibly do for him to want to burn you?"
(mission accomplished! )
"He doesn't have the right to burn anyone." I say, my eyes glinting in anger
(over accomplished )
"Her face is worse..." -He holds her-
(under accomplished? )
(I updated HUNTING DAWN!! and I must say this one is EPIC )