Frotmore the Good one

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Metal_Militia, Sep 3, 2012.

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  1. They had a battle? When?????
     
    #41 Percyous, Sep 14, 2012
  2. What?
     
    #42 tarru, Sep 14, 2012
  3. No they are going to
     
    #43 Metal_Militia, Sep 14, 2012
  4. It said that they had already had their first battle at the end. And it needs more details than BOOM!!!! POW!!!!! other than that this is pretty darn good.
     
    #44 Percyous, Sep 14, 2012
  5. Ummm that was the dragon falling down the stairs I think lol!
     
    #45 tarru, Sep 14, 2012
  6. The fight? Oh. Anywhoooo use more sound descriptions other than boom or pow. Maybe :I heard the loud thud of- Get what I mean?
     
    #46 Percyous, Sep 14, 2012
  7. :|
     
    #47 Metal_Militia, Sep 14, 2012
  8. 0.0 hello
     
    #48 tarru, Sep 15, 2012
  9. :|


















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    #49 tarru, Sep 15, 2012
  10. ARG
     
    #50 Metal_Militia, Sep 16, 2012
  11. KEEG!  I didn't know you write!  Bump! 
     
    #51 TheAndi, Sep 16, 2012
  12. I know! He is fantastic!
     
    #52 tarru, Sep 17, 2012
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