Hey Beth, I do really like the story line It's just i feel uncomfortable reading some parts.... I can't tell you what should happen, I'm not writing the book
Aww ok and well..i did say at the start as a bit of a pre-warning that it will be aimed at older people...but hey ho! And no seriously I could use the readers views I was thinking about ending this story anyway
No don't end it! I really like it it's different from other stories on FF please don't end it I love it!