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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CheekyBunny (01), Dec 17, 2011.

  1. "Oops!"we said.*
     
  2. Nice story
     
  3. We went home and mom and dad were helping Mrs.ad Mr.Hamilton.Megan was at Mrs.Hake's house.

    "Let's go to my backyard again."

    "Okay!Race you guys!"
    We ran and I was first to go to the backyard.

    "Your fast Dave!"

    "Thanks!"

    "What should we play?"

    "I don't know."

    "Let's go play with you guys' sister!"

    "Let's go."

    We went inside and found Megan and Madison playing with their toys.

    "Lwook Dave!"
    Megan and Madison got new dolls.

    "You got dolls,yes?"

    "Yes!"Megan and Madison jumped up and down.

    "Haha."I laughed.

    "I'm hungry again!"

    "Well,let's eat!I'm hungry too!Are you hungry Joseph?"

    "Yes!!"

    "Okay.Let's eat."

    They washed their hands and Max looked in the refrigerator.There was a left over of bacon,steak,boiled eggs,orange juice,sandwich,and an orange.

    "Lets eat bacon,steak,and orange juice then."

    "Okay."

    We ate until we were fool.

    "We want fwood too!"
    Megan shouted.

    We laughed.

    "Okay.Here."
    We gave them our leftovers.
    They ate until they were fool too.

    "I'm fool!"Megan said.

    "Me too!"Maddie said and we laughed.

    "Well,we better go do our homework!"

    "Yeh!"

    "Wanna do it here Joseph and Max?"

    "Yeh sure."
    We took out our homework and we read it.

    "That's easy."

    "Yeh.We only have to add!"
    We did our homework fast because we wanted to play in the backyard!
     
  4. It's really good Justin
     
  5. We were still doing our homework.Adding was easy.I practiced it with mom and dad.
    They were an awesome teacher!

    "I'm almost done!Three more questions!"

    "Yay!"Megan and Maddie jumped up and down.


    "Can you two stops please?"

    "Okay!"They stopped jumping.

    "Thanks!"

    I only got one more adding to do.And then i was going to be....

    "Done!"

    "Me too!"

    "Same!"

    We laughed.

    "Let's go play now.You two stay here okay?"

    "Okay!"

    Then we ran outside to the backyard to play.

    "Uh..Lets play...I don't know.Maybe we should play with your sisters."

    "You want to Max?"

    "Sure.Their our sisters!"

    We went back in.

    "We're going to play with you two okay?"

    "Okay!"

    Megan and Maddie gave us dolls until Mrs.Hake appeared at the door.

    "Oh my!"

    "Hi Mrs.Hake!"

    "You kids playing dolls?"

    "Yes!"

    Mrs.Hake laughed.

    "What!"

    "You silly kids!"

    And then we started to laugh.

    "Megan and I better get home,Mrs.Hake!"

    "Me too!"

    "Bye Mrs.Hake!"

    "Bye Dave and Megan!"

    We waved and she did the same.

    We ran home and the cold breezy wind was a little bit blowing us!

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    Tell me if u like.
    Comments are good
     
  6. I like. 
     
  7. 
     
  8. January 5


    The lake was cold.I was playing with my sister and mom was cooking and dad was helping the helpers build our farm.Someone knocked on the door.Mom wiped her hands on her apron.

    "Coming!"
    Mom opened the door and Max,Joseph,and Maddie stood there.

    "Oh it's your friends Dave.Come in kids."

    They came in and took out their jackets.

    "Hey Max and Joseph.And Madison."

    "Hi!"

    "Hey!"

    "Why r you guys here?"

    "Maddie wanted to play with Megan."

    Megan met up with Maddie.

    "And we wanted to play with u."

    "But we don't have nothing to play with."

    "Let's play in your backyard."

    "Oh yeh.Let's go!"

    We went and Megan and Maddie followed us.

    "Can we play with our dolls here?"

    "Sure you can."

    "Thank you!"

    "Hide and seek?"

    "Sure!"

    "I'm it this time!"

    "Okay!"

    Joseph and Max hid and I didnt know where they were.

    "Hmm.Where could they be?"

    I thought and thought.I saw a tall bush and I knew they were behind it.

    "Boo!"
    I scared them and they jumped up.


    "You are good at finding too."

    "Thanks."

    Mom saw us playing.

    "Come on kids.Dinner's ready."

    We went back in,washed our hands,and ate.The food was good.

    "You and Mrs.Hake cook great food!"

    "Thank you Max!"

    "Your welcome!"

    "Now Dave.Do u want to have a sleepover with your friends?"

    "Yes."

    "Okay.Max and Joseph go asks your mom."

    "Okay.We'll be back Dave!"

    "Okay!"

    And they went.
     
  9. Pretty good  keep it up!! 
     
  10. Max and Joseph came back.

    "My mom said I can."

    "Mines too."

    "Okay.Let's go upstairs to fix up our beds."

    We went and fixed our beds.

    "I'm sleeping in the middle!"

    "Okay.We're sleeping in the side"

    I always want to be in the middle because I mostly get the warmth.

    "Dave!Max!Joseph!Clean up your mess please!"

    "We'll be down!"

    We were done fixing our beds.We went downstairs and cleaned up our mess at the table.We each grabbed a wet rag and wiped the table.

    "This is kind of fun."

    "Yeh!"

    "Yep."

    Megan and Maddie were giggling.

    Then we went to sleep.

    "Sleep tight!"Mom tugged us in and went downstairs.

    "Let's do a puppet show."

    "Okay!"

    I did a dog,Max did a hawk,and Joseph did a flower.
    The flower one was easy!

    "The flower is easy!"

    "My dad taught me how to do it."

    "Cool."
    We did it and it was really easy!


    "Let's sleep.I'm so tired."

    We slept until mom called us to go downstairs.