Forgotten Love

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by GP-TheNerdyOne, Mar 21, 2013.

  1. I might need a new idea Shan.
     
  2. JUST WRITE ABOUT SOME TRAGIC DEATH
     
  3. Updateplz
     
  4. Updateeee? Loveee it!
     
  5. I'm back!?
    So, I obviously have no idea what I'm doing now.

    But, an update will be up shortly.
     
  6. Oh, and bump
     
  7. 
    We're back!
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    Rachel's POV

    I strummed my fingers along the desk. I couldn't wait until class was over. Then I could go to Finn....

    Wait, no! Blake, Blake, Finn...

    Agh!

    How long until this ends?

    As if on cue, the bell rings. I gather up my books and wait until Finn passes me. And then I follow him.

    "Hey Finn!" I awkwardly try to talk to him in the mob of students.

    "Hey Rachel. I hear you're dating Blake," He replied. "Be careful, look at what happened to Amanda. I don't want it to happen to you."

    Aww. He's a cutie.

    "Well I don't care. I love him and he loves me."

    We finally made it out of the classroom.

    "And we're gonna have a happy ending," I continued. "We're gonna start a life together."

    "Rachel! You don't get it, do you? He's going to end your life, not start one." Finn whispered.

    "Why do you care? That all ended when you decided to break up with me." I was getting angry at him now.

    "Yeah, but.."

    I walked away.

    "Rachel!" Finn called after me.

    I continued to walk. But a smile formed on my face.

    Nadia's POV

    "I'm dropping out. I got sued for killing that woman!" Keely screamed.

    "Suit yourself."

    I was angry. I tried to kill Amanda for being with Blake, and now Rachel has him! Do I have a sign on my head that says 'Boyfriend for Sale!'

    I don't think so.

    Keely stormed out of the room.

    I sat down. In 10 minutes, I had an interview with a woman for Yale.

    I know, I know. Why?

    My daddy was a awesome person. Then he found out mommy was having an affair and he went crazy.

    I was eight then. I remember seeing them fight and she threw a bottle across the room.

    But I remember all the happy moments that we had before. When sometimes Maggie would come over and we would play dress-up and doctor.

    Then mom left. Daddy was placed in a asylum.

    I became bitter.

    Mom's and Daddy's wish when they left was that I would be in Yale.

    I hated Mom. I blamed her for everything. But, I felt like I owed something to Dad.

    The doorbell rang, snapping me out of my thoughts.

    I rushed downstairs to open the door.

    "Hi, my name is Katherine Moire, you must be Nadia Vondeling?" She stuck out her hand.

    I shook it. "Hi Katherine, yes, I'm Nadia. Come in."

    Okay, so the interview was SO boring. So I'll just skip telling you about it.

    "Nadia, as you are a lovely person, I can't accept you."

    My smile dropped. "Why not?"

    "I can't tell you. But I can tell you this. A woman, Clara Parks, would've accepted you. But she was hit by a car by a young girl. 15, 16? But she is dead now. I'm sorry."

    ...Keely.

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    So I hope you liked this update, I'm sorry

    I've been gone for 6 months now But I'm back!
     
  8. WHAT THE... AUTOCORRECT  BAMMMMMM*
     
  9. Just kidding . I thought autocorrect changed it to bam mom 
     
  10. Of course it's your idea Shan. I didn't forget about it