Forever and Always

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *MyNameisShirley (01), Nov 8, 2011.

  1. "Ha ha, I beat you home!" sang Jody, Julia's younger sister.
    "I don't care" said Julia.
    Jody stared. "You should care. You lost. You owe me ten bucks." What was wrong with her sis? She was always the one home first, making her pay ten dollars each day, and she clearly said that if Jody beat her, she would pay ten bucks plus a dollar extra tip. She promised. And now she said no.
    "But you promised" Jody argued.
    "Go away Jody" said Julia.
    "But--"
    "GO AWAY! WHAT PART OF THAT DO YOU NOT UNDERSTAND?!!!!"
    With that, she went inside the house, making sure to slam the door. Hard. Jody stood there, holding back tears.
     
  2. Tell me if u  it so far. :)
     
  3. Julia didn't mean to yell at her sister. But she was annoyed. Mark had broken up with her. Mark Boyle, the handsomest, nicest and sweetest boy ever. Who said he'd be with her forever. And always. And he was breaking up with her . Julia Howards, 5'9, tenth grader, rich blonde hair, sparkling blue eyes, sweet smile, pretty face. All of her friends thought that Julia and Mark matched like cookies and cream. Mark had dirty brown hair, brown eyes that makes you feel relaxed, and HOT. They were the most popular people at school, and Julia did not know how she would face the people tomorrow at school. News spread like that . But there was one thing that Julia was sad about. Mark had broken up with her...
     
  4. Mark walked all the way home. He didn't mean to hurt Julia. He never even wanted to break up with her, but he had to, or else she would be in great danger.
     
  5.  Here in my house, there are candles burning bright, one for every night of the holiday. We gather with friends sharing gifts and happy times, Happy Han- nu-kah. And in my neighbors house, the lights are shining too, red and green and blue, round the door. The sound of jingle bells, and laughter everywhere, Merry Christmas and many more! 
     
  6. That had nothing to do with the story by the way, lol. It's a song that my chorus teacher taught us for our winter concert.
     
  7. okay I thought it was part of it
     
  8. Lol so BUMP!!!
     
  9. As I said my mind has gone blank but I'll try!
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  10. Omg! It cut me off!!!!