First kiss

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *dangbro (01), Aug 17, 2011.

  1. you shouldn't bump unless your updating..

    just saying..
     
  2. don't bump your story unless your updating.
    it's pointless..
     
  3. Yeah, it is...
    Gets your readers hopes up... 
     
  4. I'm sorry. But it's my story.
     
  5. Lol I remember
    My parents saying things like Tht wen i was younger 
    Great story

    But is it all 2 good 2 b true? hmm
     
  6. It will get super exciting.
     
  7. I know it's your story..
    but your dissapointing your readers when you bump and don't update.
    you've lost me,
    I'm done checking this to see if there's updates,
    it wasnt that good anyways...
    have fun writing and pointlessly bumping!
     
  8. The 15 second walk to the door felt like 15 hours. Finally I got there and slowly opened it. "Hey" i said
    "hi!" said Jase "Ready to go?"
    "yep! Mom, I'm leaving!" my mom ran into the entry way.
    "You didnt put on a bra like I told you, did you?"
    "Mom, were leaving." I steped outside and pulled the door shut behind me. "Sorry about that. " I told Jase.
    " It's fine. Right before I left my mom asked me if we were planning on having sex tonite."
     
  9. What did he say...? 
     
  10. To his mom
     
  11. I think I must have turned pale. "I said no" he reassured me. I breathed a sigh of relief. By the the time we got to the restaurant, I felt like we had know each other for ever. As we pushed open the resteraunt door, I noticed a door mat that said "Food and Love are the things we make here. " as we walked in I tripped on it.