First kiss

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *dangbro (01), Aug 17, 2011.

  1. THANK YOU EVERY ONE FOR BEING SUCH GREAT FANS! I WILL KEEP THIS STORY FOR A LONG TIME BECAUSE OF THE SUPPORT
     
  2. B-U-M-P
    BUMP!!!!!!!!
     
  3. B-U-M-P!!!! Pretty pretty please. Fell in love with this story from the beginning! 
     
  4. He's getting upset
     
  5. I felt like I was in a dream as I stepped in to the house. The entrance was a beautiful, not to mention all gold, fountain. There was an elevator that jace pulled me into. I was glad that the butler had returned home early from his vacation. It was better than having too see 83 rooms empty. That gave me the creeps.
    We took the elavator up to the 6th floor. Jace led me into a large room. It was complete with its own flat screen and bathroom. Jace said "I'll be right back. " A moment later he came back and said "There's a surprise waiting for you in the bathroom. " I walked in to the bathroom slowly. And then, what I saw made my stomach leep. There, sitting on the counter was..........
































    TO BE CONTINUED
     
  6. AAAAHHHHHH!!!!  plz update
     
  7. Ahhh cliff hanger!!
     
  8. A lace bra and condoms!!?!!?!! The next thing I new Jace was kneeling by me. "What happened?" I asked
    "You fainted. Are you okay?"
    "Yeah. Thanks. " he pulled me into a hug, but I resisted. I didn't know if the bra and condomans were the surprise, so I asked jace what the surprise was. He helped me up, and didn't let go of my hand. He pulled back the curtain, revealing the most beautiful dress i had ever seen. "OMIGOSH!" I cried "This is for me?!?!"
    "If it fits." replied Jace.
    "Thank you." I pulled him into a hug.
    "Go try it on. "