~First Generation Vampire War~

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *DanielleValler (01), Jul 27, 2011.

  1. I just remembered it's my birthday
     
  2. Oh happy b-day
     
  3. Happy birthday!-sally
     
  4. Thx guys wait y did I post on here?  idk sorry for getting off topic
     
  5. This a great story!!
     
  6. Thanks and Happy Birthday!! 
     
  7. Yeah it is(I'm not big on romance/vampire stuff but I like it) and thx for the all the B-day love guys  im excited for this story
    And imma upload a story vie been writing in a while or so check it out (characters already made but suggestions welcomed)
     
  8. Hmmm I'll wall you, the spoiler, and then you can't tell anyone, okay?
     
  9. It's called The Final Breath
     
  10. THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  11. Thanks Hexin!  your in the next one to, and that's a really good title for a story dude.  I wanna read it!
     
  12. It's posted now so check it out pls and leave a comment pls
     
  13. When's the spoiler
     
  14. The spoiler is, I just finished the fourth chapter!! And it's pretty long!!
     
  15. GIVE IT TO ME! PLUS CONGRATS ON BEING ON MY FAN FIC NEWS
     
  16. Here's the fourth chapter, enjoy!! 
    Warning, this chapter contains, blood, sex, and boos!! Like the song!! Lol kidding but it does have blood ! And a fight!!

    ~First Generation Vampire War~(chapter 4: my first kiss, and other things)

    *Danielle's pov*
    Emit sat with me, in the nurses office. He had to breath in with his shirt over his nose. But, it still didn't stop his desire for my blood. The nurse, had to suck poison out. The name of the guy who did this, was Chase. He meant to shoot Emit, so I'm glad I got in his way. The nurse was still taking the bullet, and the poison out. It stung like fuck. "I'm sorry, this may take a while"the nurse said. I sucked in a deep breath. I couldn't breath it out. But a man came running in. "May!! Seth's escaped!!"he yelled. May stopped and ran out with the man. "hopefully, she got all the poison out, before she ran off like that..."I mumbled. I felt my arm go numb. "no, no she didn't"Emit said. "I can smell it in your blood. Danielle, let me take it out..."he said. "no, because then you'll die! This is vampire poison, the worst it's gonna do to me, is make me pass out for an hour or two. But it'll kill you"I told him. But it was to late, he had already started to lick the blood away, I don't know how he did it, but he separated the poison, from the blood, swallowed the blood, and spit out the poison. He just couldn't go near the wound though, and I know why. "Emit, stop, it's gone. You don't have to do it anymore"I told him. He stood up, licking a small amount of my blood that was left on his lips away. He kissed my cheek. "I'm sorry you had to get shot"I mumbled, as I blushed. "it's okay, I'm actually glad I stood in it's way"I mumbled. "Danielle, I can't stand to see you get hurt, I would've rather gotten shot"he said. I rolled my eyes. "Emit, why can't you just say, 'thank you'? I mean, I never say thank yo-"but Emit cut me off, by lifting my chin up, and kissing me. I was shocked, but happy, but at the same time, I was sad. I had mixed emotions. He pulled away, and walked off. I stood there, dumb struck. I covered my mouth. I was so confused. What are my feelings for Emit? Should I have kissed back? Did he really mean that kiss, or was it just his blood lust? Do I love him as a brother, or do I love him? "I'm so confused..."I mumbled. After awhile, the nurse came back. She looked at the wound, and smiled when she didn't see anymore poison. She had to stitch it up though. "you won't get these stitches off, until the end of April"she told me. "so, I have to wear these stitches over spring break!!?"I cried. She nodded. /damnit!/I thought. "thank you"I said and walked out. I sighed. "there goes my flawless body, flirting this year..."I mumbled. "well, it's not like I really care..."I added. "Danielle!"Seth whisper yelled. I looked at him and smiled. "they found out that I escaped!"he whisper yelled, again. "I know, but that's okay. Didn't Emit tell you, that he had a crew waiting for you?"I asked him. "no..."he replied. "well, your supposed to meet them at cocoa beach at midnight."I said smiling. He nodded. "oh, alright. But where should I hide till then?"he asked. "you can hide in, my room, although Amber might try to have sex with you..."I thought, mentally slapping myself or my friends, and envisioning Amber, and her flirting. She had broken up with Ryan, a little after we helped Damien. Shortly after I told Seth that, he ran into the dorm room. I laughed. "it's literally, raining men. Hallelujah"I giggled. I closed my eyes, as I walked humming 'It's Raining Men'. While I had my eyes closed, I pumped into someone. "ow"I mumbled as I fell on my ass. I looked up to see the person I bumped into. I rolled my eyes. Draco. The most annoying, rudest, jackass, jerk in the school. "watch where your going."he said. I stood up. I glared. "why don't you watch where your stepping"I retorted. "out of my way"he said and walked off. "Jackass!!"I yelled out after him. I needed to find Emit. I'd just avoid the kiss subject. I found Emit, shirtless, training in the work out gym. He was punching a punching bag. He was dripping with sweat, but I couldn't stop starring at him. I blushed lightly, then closed my eyes trying to regain my compouser. I opened my eyes again and walked in. "Emit"I said. He stopped and looked at me, grabbing his towel and trying to at the least, get rid of some excess sweat. "yea?"he asked, an drank some water. "I want to help..."I said. He raised an eyebrow, then realized I was talking about the war. "no, no, no, no"he told me. "Emit, I really want to. When I was down in the cellar, I saw them take a seven year old boy, and shoot him. And that boy reminded me of when I found you."I told him, putting my hand on his chest. I remember, exactly what happened, as if it were yesterday.

    *flash back twelve years ago*

    *Danielle's pov*
    I skipped happily, as I held my mothers hand, as we walked through the streets of Time Square, in New York City. I hummed, the veggie tales song as we did. But I heard fair sobbing, coming from an alleyway. "mommy, someones crying"I told her. "not right now sweetie, I'm on the phone"she told me. I crossed my arms. The sobbing got louder, and then I heard the clicking of a gun. I let go of my mothers hand, of course I new what I gun was at this age. I lived in New York City for pets sake, I had to know. I saw a man pointing a gun at a little boy, he had tears running down his face, his eyes a deep blue, with hints of grey, and red from crying. At one point, I saw a red tear drop. He was crying so hard, his eyes began to bleed. I felt so bad for him. I ran, and hugged him, not really remembering that the guy in front of us had a gun. The little boy was shocked at my actions. His body tensed, and he still shook. The man with the gun, put it down. No longer aiming at the boy. But instead of leaving. He put another bullet in his gun, and aimed it at my head. I was shocked, and now frightened. But my mom came up behind the man, and hit him in the head, with a lead pipe. "no one, aims a gun at my child, and gets away with it."she told the man's unconscious body. I smiled and ran to hug my mom. "baby, don't you ever do that again. "she told me, hugging me and kissing my head. "but mommy, that big meanie was going to hurt that boy!"I said, and pointed at the six year old.

    *end flash back*

    "but, I couldn't save him. It was to late, he was shot. Unlike you, who I got to in time. But my mom, got to us in time"I mumbled the last part about my mom. He sighed, he took my hand off of his chest, and just held it, rubbing his thumb against the side of my hand slowly, it tickled. "I don't want you involved in the war, Danielle."he said. "but Emit, I'm already involved in it. No matter what, I'm already involved. I've been involved since my dad, has been my dad."I told him. "but I don't want to see you get hurt. What if you get hurt, and no one but you, and the person who hurt you is there, hmm? I can't let that happen..."he told me. He began to move his lips again, but nothing came out. As if he was trying to tell me something, but just couldn't. "Emit..."I was going to yell at him, but stopped myself. There were butterflies in my stomach, and anticipation was my mood. He kept getting closer, and closer. I realized, that I loved Emit. He's been the one, who's always been there, and he always will be. He intertwined our fingers together. He was going to kiss me, but stopped and kisses my forehead instead. I was shocked. He pulled back, wrapping his arms around me, and picked me up, hiding behind training equiptment. I was confused, until I saw a blonde, girl walk in, with yellow eyes, and blood red lips. Extremely pale skin. A man walked in beside her, it was the silver haired man. "Nadia, you said they were in here, I don't see them"he said. "well, I saw them. And I can sense the girl, but Lord Emit, I cannot."she said. "but it is hard to tell, which women is which. They're so many"I assumed her name was Nadia. /Then who did? Alic, Jegan, Nadia, and Eili/Seth's words ran through my head. Nadia, was this the Nadia Seath was talking about? After a few more minutes of arguing, they left. "who are they Emit? And why did she call you Lord Emit?"I asked. He sighed. "that was my cousin Alic, and one of his servants Nadia. They're evil, vampires, who wish to enslave humans. It's apart of an orginazation, trying to over throw the world, and the council."he told me. "why did she call you Lord Emit?"I asked him, again. "because, I'm the only, pure pureblood left"he said. "what do you mean? There's lots of other purebloods." "no, in all the other pureblood family's, they're's a human, that polluted the line of pureblood's somewhere along the line. I'm the only one, with no human's in my family. Well, there is another but, a lot of people say she doesn't exist."he told me, I nodded. "I still wanna help in the war."I told him. He sighed. "why do you have to be so damn stubborn?"he asked. "because, I'm just that lovable"I giggled. He smirked, and pecked my lips. "you don't know how right you are"he mumbled, I giggled and this time, I was the one who kissed him first. I was beginning to like this day.

    ~Midnight~

    *Seth's pov*
    Some gang this is. All it is, is a bunch if vampires, having drunken sex on the beach, normal sex, in the water, and dancing with beer. Some dude with orange hair led me through all the vampires on the beach, to a beach house, that had music blasting out of it. The song 'Blood, Sex, and Boos' playing. /well, it is the vampire theme song.../I thought not so happily. This guys name was Shane, he had a brother named Tyler, and another one named Alex, who I also met. Tyler had black hair, and a lip piercing, and Alex had snake bites. Just great. A weird girl, dressed as a hippie, and as drunk as you could get was dancing in the water, with her clothes on. I had to keep from laughing. Shane shook his head. He grabbed her hand pulling her out of the water. She was wearing a Boho dress, with bright tights on underneath. "Delilah, get out of the water"Shane told her. "just stay cool, and go with the flow, cool cat"she slurred. I still had to keep from laughing.

    *Sally's pov*
    I sat on a couch, in a beach house. My friends and I, were not having much fun. Everyone, but us was dancing and other things were happening, but we weren't. Jenny, Halley, and I, were leaving. Why were we even there?

    *Danielle's pov*
    "so, do you guys wanna do it with me?"I asked the group of pacifiers. They all nodded, very pleased with my idea. Emit sat next to me, sulking. He couldn't stop me from getting involved in the war. The only reason he was giving in to letting me do this, was because I told him we'd keep our identities a secret. He was still sulking, after everyone but us went back to their dorms. I sat in front of him. "why do you do this to me?"he asked. I shrugged, smiling. He sighed, pulling me into his lap. "your gonna male my hair turn gray"he mumbled against my cheek. "oh well, I'll still love you"I giggled. "but Emit, vampires normally stay stuck at age seventeen, you can't grow gray hair"I gasped sarcastically. "haha, very funny"he said, sarcastically back. "why did you have to pick something so dangerous..."he mumbled. I shrugged. "because it's more fun. And because it has a better impact on the hunters, and vampires"I told him. He sighed. "if you gonna start doing this tomorrow your gonna have to get some sleep."he mumbled. "awww, fine. But you know I'm a midnight rose, and like to stay up till I see sunlight"I mumbled. He made me stand up, so he could stand up. "I don't care. Good night"he said and kissed the top of my head. "night"I mumbled. I walked into my dorm, amber already asleep, so I didn't turn the light on. I unbuckled my weapons belt. It had a taizer, a gun, vampire poison, and peper spray. Emit, told me to where it, so I did. It also had, what vampire hunters call, the steal stake. In old folk tales you would have to put a wooden stake through a vampire's heart, but that's not true. The steal stake, is a retractible, steal pipe covered in silver crosses. A cross at the end to. The cross didn't really do much, unless coated in vampire poisons. Once that was off, I took off my shirt, then two pale arms, snaked around my waist, as a tongue dance on my neck, making soft purring noises. At first I thought it was Emit, but then they opened their eyes. "Alic"I mumbled. "good guess, now it's time for your prize..."he mumbled as his fangs grew. He was about to bite my neck, but I kicked my foot against his chest. He hit the wall with a thud. "wow, you sure do have a powerful kick"he said and reappeared in front of me. "but it doesn't do much, to me"he added. I was gonna punch him, but he caught my hand. He started bending the wrist backward. You could hear popping noises. "ahhh"I silently cried in pain. I tried to uppercut him, but he kicked me in the stomach, twice. I coughed up blood. That's when his fangs grew longer, and his eyes dark red. He backed me up against a wall. I was determine to beat him, before he bit me. Right when he was about to bite my neck, I kneed him in the stomach. He let go of me, and I had an opening to kick him in the face. Which I did, gladly. Finally, I kicked him in his junk, then he left. I panted. "maybe, I should sleep with garlic tonight..."I mumbled, as I cleaned up my spilt blood.
     
  17. Hexin, my story wasn't made to be like twilight!! I just like vampires, and love stories, but I didn't really like the twilight's kind of vamps...