Nice job so far. Just remember tons of detail, and proofread it for spelling, capitalization, and punctuation errors. Bump!
Chapter 7 "Band on the run" Alison and I made it safely out of the woods without incident and our first thing we did was change how we looked. Alison dyed her hair black put on black makeup and put on black clothes I did the same we joined a metal band and worked as roadies. "Hey you get my drums put away!" the drummer said to me as he walked past. His name was gene and he was a really nice guy I enjoyed talking to him and he asked me what Alison and I had been arrested for as it turned out all of their roadies had been arrested and escaped from prison somehow or another. They were sort of like a "band on the run" you could say so I told him I had been framed for murder and I had no idea about Alison. "We need to talk." Alison said as she walked past with the guitarists prized guitar. "About what?" I asked her. "About what I was arrested for I know your curious so I'll tell you meet me at my hotel room tonight." with that she walked out. What could it be and why in her hotel room I wondered in my head.
(I guess nobody thinks this is any good right that's kind of a bummer because nothing I ever do gets any fans I guess I'm not very good at writing if you do like this you should know for a little while there won't be any updates because my school load is gonna be really heavy this year so I won't have much time to spend on pimd)