Feelings Never Felt

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  1. Back to Chloe!

    It's not Friday Friday Gotta get down on Friday~~~ oops. Imma stop now. X3

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    I wore my black mini skirt and my black sleeveless diamond top and put on my jewelry.


    "Donte! Let's go!"

    He wore a regular white shirt and black jeans.

    "Whatever..."

    "Ha! Aren't angels not supposed to sulk?"

    I grabbed his hand and walked out. I remember the card said it was a Halloween party. We start school in October so... I got myself a mask! It was a black one. It looked like a person stuck a bird's wing on ur face. But it looked nice. Donte grew out his wings and we both set off.

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    Part 1. Too tired.
     
  2. We arrived at the place. It was a mansion. A huge one. I looked at Donte. He pointed at the windows that had disco light beams coming out of them.

    "Let's go!"

    I grabbed his hand and ran inside. Before I knew it, Lance appeared and he was wearing a mask and he looked just like a real vampire. Very old fashioned.

    I ignored him and walked to a group of people playing spin the bottle.


    "Hey Donte!"

    A few girls came up to him.

    Three girls. One was wearing a protoactive cat woman costume and another a playboy bunny. And the third wore a very revealing fairy costume. Girls these days... But I wasn't that different. My dress revealed my legs and my back and it was low cut. Yet it wasn't as revealing as the girls.


    "Hey Donte! Wanna get high?"

    Two girls pulled out a bottle of champaigne and a box of weed.

    He looked at me and smiled.

    "No thanks girls."



    We made our way to the group and sat down.

    "Hi guys!"

    It was my friends. Elena, Marcus, Daniel, Marie, Joanne and... Lance. Elena and Joanne were my friends. The rest I didn't know.

    They let us in the group and I pulled Donte down to let him sit next to me.

    "Ok... Truth and Dare!"

    I looked confused. What about spin the bottle? I was hoping to kiss Donte.

    "Oh! Sorry... We already played that game for like... The 57 time? Lance got the most kisses."

    I hope he kissed a guy.


    "So. Chloe! Truth or Dare?"

    "Dare!"

    I was such a daredevil.

    "Ok...Think ya can handle it?"

    I nodded.

    "Ok. Lance, you dare Chloe!"

    He grinned and whispered the dare into Daniel's ears.


    "Oooooh! Man! Yo Chloe, he dared you to drink this!"

    He pushed a peach colored liquid in my face.

    "Uhh... What is it?"


    "No idea."

    I drank it.

    It tasted like peach. I felt woozy and dizzy.

    Everyone had their turns until Joanne yelled.

    "7 MINUTES IN HEAVEN!!"

    Everybody agreed.

    Marie was paired with Marcus,

    Joanne with Daniel,

    Elena with Donte,

    Me and Lance...

    Lance grabbed me and pulled me into a room.

    "Sooo wooozzzzyyyyy..."


    I fell onto the couch and blacked out.

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    Lance!
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    I grinned. The drug worked! I sat down and her head was on my lap. I kissed her lips again and grabbed her waist.

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    I will not describe the scene. And the truth is. How much I wanna be Chloe, I'm not. This is another one. We can say she's my clone! So... There was a lot of kissing. I don't wanna describe it.

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    Donte!

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    "Sooo... Now what?"

    "You have a thing for her. Right?"

    "Who?"

    "Chloe."

    I nodded. Then I heard a yell or something.

    I ran out of the room to see Lance gone. With Chloe.
     
  3. Omgcarry on
     
  4. I woke up in a black room. It looked like the sewers. Except the room smelled like roses.

    I was still in my costume but the mask was gone.

    "Donte!"

    I yelled. After a good 10 minutes of crying, I felt something warm slide down my cheek. It was a tear. I touched my cheek to feel that I was crying a lot. The tears poured down my cheeks like a waterfall yet no sounds came out. I just closed my eyes shut and cupped my hands in my face.

    "Chloe?"

    Somebody walked in.

    I gasped when I saw who it was.


    Lance.

    He reached for me but I pulled away, backing into a corner. He cornered me and I felt scared. The room had the feeling of murder and a feeling that many people had died in here.

    "L-l-lance... P-please...L-l-let m-me g-g-go..."


    I shut my eyes, letting the tears flow freely.

    He wiped them away with his thumb and whispered into my ears.

    "I'm sorry Chloe. But I had to do this. I have to keep you."

    "F-for w-what..."

    "You will soon now..."

    He kissed me again, more passionately then the last one.

    I wrapped my arms around him and cried into his chest. He rubbed my back and kept whispering that he was sorry.

    I soon fell asleep, but muttered one last word before I did.

    "Donte..."

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    Donte

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    I lost her. I was her guardian angel, her love. She was my love, my angel, my soul. She was the one who had told me to live again.

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    Demons had not cursed me. Nor did I fall asleep. I was the only angel left. A chosen one. My friends, my family, they died in the great war with the demons. I escaped to earth, I met her. And she became the one I knew I had to protect. I became her guardian angel. The day we were in heaven was the day her parents were murdered. Murdered by Lance himself. Or Luke, as he have to call him. He was the Devil's son. We escapes to heaven and shared that one embrace. Soon after that loving embrace, she began to fade away, fade back to Earth. I tried reaching for her, but she had already gone. I cried after that, and decided to explore the hidden beyond in heaven. I looked around, millions of White rose petals scattered the clouds I walked on. They were the dissolved bodies of the angels. I fell on my knees and cried. And decided that I had enough. I lost everyone. I was about to fall right into Earth, become a shooting star. I got ready to jump until I heard a small voice.

    "Don't jump. Search for me... Please... I'm not gone. I'm there. There where you'd left me..."

    The voice faded away and I stopped. Where I left her...
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    I snapped back to reality. I knew where he had kept her; Hell.

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    That it for the chappie!
     
  5. Soooo good!! MORE
     
  6. Re: house of cards

     
  7. Dontre
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    She was in Hell when she lost me. I thought the answer was her home town but that was right too. I packed my stuff and opened a portal to the gateway.

    "Hello Dontre."

    "Peter! Peter, Peter... It's been so long since I've been back... Has God made more of us?"

    "Yes. Now, what do you want Dontre?"

    "Please... I need to go to.... Hell."

    "Hell?!?! WHY THERE?!"

    "Guardian angel... Chloe... Luke... Chosen one... Earth..."

    He opened the book of humans and found Chloe.

    "She... She's the chosen one?!"

    "Yes... I need to save her... Love... Her...."


    Peter became absoulutely shocked.

    "you... Love her?"

    I nodded.

    Then a portal appeared behind me and he shoved me inside.

    "BE CAREFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"


    I fell, right down to the gateway of Hell.


    "My... Its not usual a angel comes down here. Who are you?"

    " Dontre Naire."

    "What is your mission in Hell?"

    "Rescue."

    "Who?"

    "Chloe."

    "Chloe..."

    He froze, flipping through the books very quickly.

    "Chloe... The chosen one?!

    I nodded again.

    "Luke has her... The wedding will be held in a month. It takes approximately two months to reach the castle."

    I stared in horror.

    "But since I don't want man kind to die, here, this is a demon horse. He'll take you there in just one month! You'll be there in time for the wedding."

    "Thank you! Pardon, what's your name and why are you even nice?"

    "My name is Pandora and I was an angel..."

    She sighed and a tear drop fell on the ground.

    "I'm sorry. But I promise, I'll free you from hell."

    She smiled at me and mouthed thank you.


    I rode on the horse and looked at the map she gave me.

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    Lance/Luke! We call him Luke now.
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    She always wants that Dontre. Always Dontre. Dontre Naire, noble guardian angel of all. Psshhh. Lies. I carried her and laid her down the bed. It reminded me of that kissing session at the party. I smirked. I looked at her now, so fragile and scared. Suddenly, she started whispering something.

    "Mom... Dad... No......."

    I saw tears come out of her eyes and I remembered that day.
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    "Your daughter is the chosen one . Hand her over and you won't be harmed."

    "Never."

    Then suddenly, I thought I saw her holding hands with Dontre. She stopped to look at me slaughter her parents. I was a monster.

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    "AHHHHH!!!!!!"

    She screamed in her sleep, making me snap back to reality.


    "No... Please... Not him..... Please...."

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    Chloe's Dream
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    "Where am I..."

    "Nowhere..."

    Then a TV appeared and it showed pictures of everybody dying.

    "Mom... Dad..."

    I looked around, just to find a huge certain TV in the middle.


    "DONTE!!!!!!!"
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    Chloe
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    I woke up to find myself in a bed, scared and lost.

    "Donte...?"

    "He's not here."

    "Lance! What- Where- Why..."

    He silenced me with a kiss.

    "I have explaining to do."

    He explained everything. Everything about him, Donte, or Dontre Naire, and me.

    "You're the devil's son... I'm the chosen one, chosen to save everybody from a certain fate. Dontre was sent to me by God as a guardian. I am supposed to marry YOU to save mankind from that fate. Or marry him, to save it. I have to choose a side, either dark or light? Right?"

    He nodded.

    "I'm choosing light. Goodbye Uhh... Luke."

    I was about to walk out the door until he pulled me to face him.

    "I love you."

    He kissed me, trying to convince me. I pushed him away, angry.

    "Lies! The only people who have loved me was just Dontre!"

    "...Your parents?"

    "They... Left me...Died in a car accident while heading to Florida..."

    He shook his head cupping my face with his hands.

    "Sweet lovable Chloe... Sweet sweet Chloe... Delusional, Crazy, Retarded Chloe!"

    I pushed him away, VERY ANGRY.

    I walked to him, pointing an accusing finger.

    "What did you say."

    He smirked and replied,

    "Delusional, crazy, retarded-"

    I punched him in the face and yelled.

    "IM NOT DELUSIONAL. NOT RETARDED LIKE YOU, I may be crazy sometimes, in a good way, BUT NOT RETARDED!"

    He wiped the blood from his mouth and grabbed my waist and pulled me down.

    "Sweet... Sweet... Chloe..."

    I snarled at him, trying to get out of his grasp.

    "Your parents. Were killed by me, themselves."

    I stopped moving, staring at him, tears about to fall.

    "They didn't give you up. They loved you."

    "And you killed them."

    I broke free of his grasp and ran outside, ran to a garden full of red roses. I sat in the middle, crying my eyes out.


    "No."

    I collapsed on the black grass, pounding on it.

    "You cry too much."

    He appeared in front of me, sitting on the grass.

    "Your the cause of it."

    "I'm sorry. My father's rules."

    "You are Sooo not a rebel."

    "No, I'm not."

    "..."

    I looked away from him, thinking that why do I cry so much. They're gone. Either way.

    "I'm sorry Chloe, please. I DO love you."

    "Prove it."

    I walked out, leaving him there, giving him time to prove himself worthy of my love.
     
  8. this is Reeeeaaaally good....
     
  9. Have you ever thought of becoming an author?
     
  10. Yeas. first an actor, then model then actor.
     
  11. Thanks for all of yiur lovely support.

    Long chap just for you!
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    I rode to the pits, where father lived.

    "Father!"

    I was in the hall, marching up to him.

    "She doesn't-"

    "love you. Whatever. Just fuck her already. We need to destroy the world.. More souls... Must beat...
    Heaven!"

    "Father. I did that. Just tell me what else."

    "Seduce her or let her visit the Garden of Aden."

    "Aden? The soul oppostie of the Eden?"

    "Yes son. Seduce her then."

    I nodded, turning away, riding back to the castle.
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    I lay on the bed, daydreaming about my kiss with Dontre. Then i frowned. Luke had given me my first kiss.

    I brushed out the memory and kept fantasizing about Dontre, his smile and when i first met him.

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    "Ooof!"

    I was heading to the dango shop until i bumped into Dontre.

    "Oh, sorry!"

    I stared at him in disbelief. Sorry? Boys at my age would be angry and call me a whor. But wow... He said sorry? It was MY fault.

    "Oh no, it's my fault."

    I looked into his eyes and smiled. Ocean blue. The sea, my favorite scenery.

    "Hey, um... Whats your name? My name is Don!"

    "Hi Don, I'm Chloe!"

    We shook hands.

    "Don, would you like me treating you to some dango? They are very famous sweets in Japan and I eard a certain store around here sells them! It would be my first time trying them, but would you like to join me?"

    I smiled sweetly at him, letting him know I won't bite.

    "Sure!"

    We both walked a far way, talking in the process. Then I bumped into somebody again.

    "Hey watch it bitch!"

    He pushed past me and slapped my rear while he did so. I blushed a bright red until Dontre did something unbelievable.

    He walked up to him.

    "HEY. Is that how you treat lady?"

    "Yeah. What you gunna do about it?"

    "This."

    He punched the guy in the face, causing him to fall.

    "Wow Don! Thank you!"

    He smiled and took my hand. I blushed a light pink and he pulled me while we ran.

    "Come on! The shop is near and I'm anticipating to taste a dango!"


    I laughed. We both entered the shop and asked for dangos.

    "Sure!"

    The waitress left, and we talked and laughed throughout the whole tea time meal.

    "Haha! Don! You look like a squirrel!"

    I giggled. I pointed at his cheeks. They were puffed and filled with dango.

    He started acting like one and it made me laugh harder.

    It was getting dark and I had to go.

    "I'll walk ya!"

    I looked at him and smiled.

    "Thank you!"

    He walked me home, looking at me throughout the walk.

    We were there.

    He was about to walk away until I called after him.


    "Hey! Will i ever meat you again?"

    He smiled and replied,

    "I'll be here every weekend!"

    I nodded and smiled. We went out regularly and became best of friends.
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    I thought it was a dream...

    "Hey daydreaming doll!"

    "What?!"

    "Just follow me."
     
  12. He pulled me on top of the horse, and we rode to a garden.

    "Lan-Luke, was what you said... Real?"

    He nodded and I smiled.

    "Prove it!"

    I flicked his ear and jumped off the horse

    "Catch me if you can sucka!"

    I laughed and ran. I was the best runner in my grade.

    Suddenly, he appeared in front of me.

    "Who's a sucka now?"

    He grinned.

    "No cheatin!"

    I pouted. Wait. He looked different.
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    Yawn. Part 1
     
  13. His eyes were still bloodshot red, but it had murder in them. His hair became silver gray and I think he grew fangs... But he's still 6'1.

    "Hey! DAY DREAMING LATINA!"

    I kept staring.

    "Chloe~~~!!!"

    He shook me and I snapped out of it.

    "Huh? What?"

    "Hah! Come here, I want to show you something..."

    He led me through vines of wisteria to see a beautiful clearing in it.

    "Wow...."

    I looked up at him and he was smiling.

    "I only show this place to people I care about... And you're the first."

    I smiled at him.

    "Thanks..."

    Suddenly, he grabbed my waist and I looked up at him.

    "I love you."

    He kissed me on the lips, and I kissed back. The kiss became passionate and it lasted for a long time.

    We finally pulled away, gasping for air.

    Then it hit me. I have fallen in love with Luke.

    I stared at him and my eyes were teary again.

    "I have never showed any interest in you since I met you.. And now I'm falling in love with you after I promised I'd only love Dontre."

    I ran away, back to the garden where I'd cry all I want.
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    It hit me; I have fallen in love with her.
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    PART 2. NEXT CHAPTER HAS THE DRAMAAAA
     
  14. A month after
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    She seemed to lose her purity, her mind, her soul. Her stay in hell drove her sane. Who was he? Where is he? Why is she thinking about HIM? Why? She cried into her white palms, not aware of who was behind her. Her cries of agony filled the air, then silence took over. He couldn't bear it any longer, so he took her hand.

    "Chloe?"
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    "Chloe?"

    I turned around to see a man
    With glowing angel wings.

    "I-is th-that wh-who I-I a-a-m?"

    He stared at me in shock, shaking me with his hands.

    "Yes! Your name is Chloe.. Please don't tell me you're joking."

    I stared at him and whispered,"My name... Chloe...,"

    Then I looked at him and talk properly again.

    "Who are you?"

    He stared at me again, holding my hand.

    "Dontre... Dontre... DONTRE!"

    He yelled his name at the top of his lungs.

    "Well Dontre, hello."

    I smiled warmly at him. He looked at me with affection until he shook his head.

    "Please Chloe... Remember me..."

    I concentrated as hard as I could, until my brain started aching.

    "I- I can't..."

    He looked at me and started mumbling, "My fault... My fault..."

    I put my arms around him and asked,
    "Dontre. You haven't done anything..."

    I smiled at him until he looked at me.

    "The party Chloe. LANCE'S HALLOWEEN PARTY. HE TOOK YOU WITH HIM. PLEASE!"

    He fell on the ground silently sobbing.

    "He took you with him..."

    I looked down and put my arms around him again and kissed his forehead.

    "This is my home... I remember waking up and-"

    He looked at me with sad eyes.

    "Your stay in hell has drove you sane."

    I looked at him closely again, he looked just like the person I was crying about.

    Somrthing raced through my head as I recalled me kissing him, then it disappeared.

    "You...Me...kissing...?"

    He nodded in approval and I looked down the ground.

    "Chloe..."

    "You invaded my mind. You were the guy i was dreaming about! You-"

    He took my hands and kissed them.

    "Yes..."
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    Dontre
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    I talked to her about us, and she seemed like undersranding. Well, until Luke walked in.

    "So, this is how you call people? You can talk to them using this?!"

    Of course, I also taught her basic things so that back at Earth, we'd be 'civilized humans'.

    She stopped playing with her phone and looked up at Luke.

    "Hi..."

    She seemed a little happy about it.

    Luke smiled at her then glared at me.

    "LEAVE. NOW."

    I frowned at him and gave Chloe my puppy eyes.

    "Haha! Dontre, you're halarious!"

    Then she looked at Luke.

    "Please Lukey..."

    Lukey?!?!

    He sighed then replied,"No Chloe."

    I snarled at him.

    "You love this girl but don't love her enough to tell her history?!"

    I spat at the ground and glared at him.

    "Take. That. Back."

    Luke was pinning me onto the ground whilst I was pushing him.

    "NEVER."

    "Leave or I'll call Lucifer."

    I stared at him in disbelief. WAS HE MAD?! LUCIFER?! THE DEVIL?!?

    I sighed, "Chloe, I'll come back..."

    I got off the ground and rode back to the village.
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    Chloe
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    I waved goodbye until I felt myself crying. I wiped away my tears and sighed.

    "Lonely again..."

    Luke pulled me into a hug and whispered into my hair,

    "You'll never be alone... Not while I'm here..."

    Somehow I started to find that uncomfortable.

    "Sigh... Whatever Luke."
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    My latest chappie!
     
  15. I love this story:)
     
  16. The storys really good carry on