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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SensualPie (01), Jan 25, 2012.
"...? What?" I ask, my eyes getting lighter.
Kat: It's amazing...-Purrs-
"O-oh! Thank you..." I say surprisedly, the song I'm playing gradually blending into another
Kat: Your welcome deary...-Laughs-
I smile lightly, and my eyes return to normal. "Wh-wha?!" I flinch away from the piano, gasping.
Riku: Is something wrong, Mistress? You were playing perfectly... (Riku randomly appears! )
() "…I…" I look down, refusing to look at anyone
Kat: -Looks at her confusingly- (Is that a word confusingly?)
(Hmmm, I dunno... ) Riku: Mistress Raven..? *Walks to her*
"...w-what?" I squeeze my eyes shut
Kat: -Watches-
I turn my head down.
Riku: Are you ok..?
"..." I don't answer, timidly turning away.
Riku: *Gently lays a hand on her shoulder* What's wrong..?
"...ah! D-don't!" I tense, shaking. (so timid now that she's good )
-Jumps back into the trees, hating her own self-
Riku: *Turns her towards him slowly* Raven? Oh! *Sees her eyes and his own eyes instantly clear*
"R-Riku… what happened?" I ask, frightened
-Hugs Storm-