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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SensualPie (01), Jan 25, 2012.
Riku: Stay with me, Raven! *Keeps a grip on her, watching worriedly*
What's wrong?!
Riku: No clue... *Looks anxious*
Oh...
My eyes turn completely black, and I tense up, all the plant life and flowers around me dying
Riku: Oh, no...
W-what's happening?! --
Riku: It's... It's her... Sam, get away, hurry!
Gasping for breath, I jerk up suddenly, my eyes a burning white. (I'll explain soon )
I can't move! I-it's her emblem! I'm stuck! -Struggles but is frozen-
Riku: ... Raven? **
(Scratch that...)
R-raven?
My eyes return to normal, and blankly sit still. "..."
Riku: *Watches carefully*
-Kneels next to her- ?
"...?" I look up surprisedly, my eyes widened in confusion. "What...?"
Riku: Are you ok?
Are you okay? --
(Rofl Sam, you copy )