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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SensualPie (01), Jan 25, 2012.
"Oh! Sorry, dear." I smile, releasing Sam from the needles, and squeezing Riku.
-Collapse on the ground with cuts and scratches all over her body-
*collapses
Riku: *Looks dazed*
Walks out of hiding spot towards Sam
-Still passed out-
"Sam...You dead?" (I'm so nice)
-Thinks to Opal- I'm fine, I'm alive... Unfortunately
Thinks back -Oh...Can u move?-
Riku: *Mentally cries for help*
(XD) "…" I stand up, gently taking my hand away from Riku's.
-Thinks in reply- No... I don't think I can...
Thinks -Oh great...-
Riku: *Looks confused at Raven* (Can he move yet?)
(yep. He always could XD)
"...what...?" I ask
-Opens eyes but is still paralysed-
I turn around, my eyes gone cold.
Riku: *Realizes he can move and collapses*
Sighs and tries to help Sam up