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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by PieSexual, Apr 17, 2012.
Ben-gets really worried- Marisol!!
Marisol: *Her grip loosens*
Ben-no! No! No! -squeezes her hand-
Marisol: *Blank*
Ben-tears stream down my eyes i tried to hold them but i cant- Marisol....
Kimmy: -senses something is wrong-
Marisol: *Passed out, breathing faintly*
Ben-cries still looking at Marisols-
Marisol: *Her hand twitches*
Ben-sees the slight movement of Marisol and thinks it was just my imagination-
Marisol: *Her finger twitches*
Kimmy: -walks back to her house-
Ben-sees the fingers and looks sniling- Come on Marisol!
Marisol: *Barely opens her mouth, breathing*
Ben-dont say anything! Just rest! Dont move or do anything!
Marisol: *Opens her right eye*
Ben-looks at and smiles my face clearly showing relief-
Marisol: *Weakly smiles*
Ben-smiles and kisses her gently then makes her rest- Dont say anything just rest
Marisol: *Nods* (Brb)