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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by PieSexual, Apr 17, 2012.
Bitch
Rosalie: *Hitting the ball, running all the bases, pulling her hat*
Andrea: -Watches from a distance, not noticing Sam-
-Catches the ball and gets asked to join the opposite team-
Rosalie: *Sits in the dugout with her brother Jasper*
Andrea: -Looks down and notices Sam-
-Gets caught out and shrugs and goes and gets a drink-
Andrea: -Jumps down from the tree-
-Sees Andrea-
Andrea: -Makes my way towards Sam-
Rosalie: *Hits a homer, trotting the based*
-Dives into the dugout-
Andrea: -Walks away, cursing and swearing-
-Pants-
Andrea: -Grabs a rock at throws it at my window, breaking it-
-Hears the smash and jumps-
Andrea: -Cries-
-Walks to her-
Andrea: -Doesn't notice her-
What's wrong...?