Emotions are distracting

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *aleieie (01), Jun 5, 2012.

  1. Continued( I thought it was too short)

    I groaned an wondered how I was going to do this. I mean, Matthew is a great guy and all, his perfect brown hair, and his blue eyes, he was muscular but not as sexy as Xander( who I personally thought exaggerated or his name)
    Xander was I don't know........ exciting, he swooped me off my feet and put me on his back for gods sake!
    I sighed of course Xander was sexy.... And crazy but I didn't know him that well. Matthew could of course be a pervert if he wanted to or if I was in tight clothes. I sighed again and then got off the elevator and opened my apartment to feel something under my foot. I looked and it was a key to my apartment. I guess Xander gave it back........
    Anyways I have known Matthew for about a year now. We had something of a relationship going and he was very loyal to me. He was so nice and sweet, caring even. That was something very rare for a guy, cause usually they stare at your as* or bo***.
    I wondered if Xander was a gentleman too. Before I could decide I fell asleep on my bed........
















    Who should she go to?????I am going to let my readers decide o3o
     
  2. XD you say it so plainly well imma wait till 12 cause me so bored round that time
     
  3. Anybody else?!
     
  4. Fudge I almost finished my new update an then I accidentally pressed cancel o_O

    Zuri's POV

    I was temporarily deaf in my left ear because I got too close to it. I watched tv for a while till it was ten. I put one of this shorts that show off your bottom but I had found one that was decent but still showed of my bottom. I put a tank top and a v neck shirt. I straightened by black ad blue hair.

    I got there earlier then Xander and called Matthew to tell him I can't make it cause I friend was coming at the exact same time and I haven't seen him in like forever. He said e understood and hung up. I felt bad but it soon faded when Xander came shirtless again.

    Our waitress flirted with him the whole time like I wasn't there. He noticed this and turned his attention to the menu. We both ordered the same thing a famous coffee and a chocolate muffin. I smiled an just as we were going out of the coffee shop Matthew came in with a............













    Girl. My eyes started to water cause thy kissed jut as they came in. Matthew saw me and he started to stutter.

    " Z-Zuri it's n-not what you t-think" And he reached out. I was retreating but two strong, warm hands pulled me close. Xander had pulled me close to him, his hands on my waist. I tensed up but soon I melted into his warm arms. Xander looked at the guy and I swear I thought I saw his eyes flash re before returning to their normal color. Matthew looked like he was about to kill Xander. I knew that he always carried a knife on him. I was thinking when suddenly a flash of silver and the sound of a bone breaking came. Startled at how fast Xander's arms came off of me, I stumbled just a bit. I looked and saw that Xander hand Matthews knife hand and he was pushing down on his thumb so I knew where the crack came from. Matthew groaned and stayed inside while Xander took me out. He was holding me close as if his life depended on it.
     
  5. Adorable! And what Xander did to Matthew are the benefits of having a robot as a friend! Bump! I am loving this so keep goin!
     
  6. The downside is you can erase his memory so easily......

    Xander's POV

    I saw this 'Matthew' with a different girl. I wondered what hit my skin and I saw Zuri, a wet drop slid down her cheek and I guessed she was unhappy. I was about to growl at the guy but my robot mind took over and I felt red flash in my eyes. I kept on staring before I casually broke Matthews thumb while he was attempting to stab me. ' Weak..' I thought as he groaned in pain and let go of the weapon. I felt my grip tighten on her as we walked out. I could now feel many more wet drops on my arm. I wondered what she would call them.

    It was still around noon and I wondered if Zuri would like to go swimming when I heard a knock at my door. Zuri had wanted to be alone so she went home. I opened it to find Hailey in a shirt too tight and you could see her under clothing and a stringy thingy that was underwear.

    " What do you want?" I asked angry.

    " Woah there tiger... No need to be aggressive" and she leaned in to kiss me. I backed away and I could see she was mad.

    " Hey when someone goes to kiss someone you have to kiss them back" she said and got closer, closing the door behind her. She soon had me backed up into my bedroom and she laid on my bed, her finger making a motion which I assumed was to get me closer. I shook my head and did the same thing, she had her shirt ad shorts off my now. She followed me before I picked her up bridal style. ( pwease don't hate me XD)
    She giggled a I was heading towards my bedroom before suddenly....




































































    I quickly turned and dashed to my apartment door. I threw her out close the door then threw out her clothes.

    " You as*****!!!!!" she said before covering her mouth. I heard her say " I can forgive you for this" and I smirked.

    " You will be mine, no one has rejected me!" she said looking at my door.

    "Well then...... Consider me the first" I said smirking cause I knew she was looking at the door.
     
  7. Bump haha o thought they were going to...
     
  8. Yep XD I gotcha lol hahahhahaha
     
  9. Anybody have suggestions for next update??
     
  10. Do Xanders pov!!!!
     
  11. I meant Matthew lol
     
  12. Matthew is the Fu**stick that pretends to love Zuri and plays her to get her in bed and then she walks in on him makin out with another girl in HER house with Robot dude by her side.. Robot dude then proceeds to instinctively kill Matthew not only cuz he hurt Zuri but bcuz he was about to do that sl:)ut hailey who thought Robot dude was killing him outta jealousy and then tries to piss Zuri off by purposely making her witness robot dude get kissed in his head after catching them in some place that's special to both robot dude and Zuri :)
     
  13. XD

    Matthew's POV

    I had gotten Zuri's phone call and I put my best sad voice on. I was going to call her to tell her I can't go. Well I was meeting up with Nicole for a college project. Well I picked her up and drove to the coffee place. I always thought Nicole had feelings for me. Once we got out she got a hold of my hand, I pulled away but she got a hold again an she squeezed my hand hard, her nails digging into my skin. I sighed and we entered, I think she saw Zuri so she quickly put her lips against mine. I closed my eye put then pulled away. Well after that my thumb was broken and I was sure that Zuri hated me an her shirtless friend had pulled her close, a little more then a friend.


    I then noticed it was her friend at the apartment.








    She was lying too!!!
     
  14. Anybody like this??
     
  15. Anybody want me to update?