Do You Hear Me?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by GoddessOfTheWaters, Aug 22, 2011.

  1. Again, THANKS FOR ALL THE SUPPORT! This was my first story and I was afraid nobody would read it but you guys did! OH! And check out One Or the Other. Its my second story. Now enough with the boring stuff
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    "I'm so sorry. I can't even explain it in words. To think that you were watching everything I said, and did and felt.... I... I....I..." I just couldn't find the right words to explain my feelings.

    "Stop it, Tee. Don't worry about it. Really. That was then and this is now. And right now, I love you more than anything. I love you enough to put the things you did aside. Stop blaming everything on yourself, Tiana. Please." His words were so soft, his smile warm. His love was my drug. His love made everything better. It made everything drift away. Just like he told me to, I stopped worrying about it. I attempted to kiss him, but he wouldn't let me.

    "One thing though. If you kiss me, I have to go back to Heaven." He warned. I was devastated. One kiss was all I needed. "But, I can go into other peoples' bodies and kiss you throught them." This still didn't console me. I wanted to kiss HIM, but I guess I would have to settle for him inside another persons body. At least he was with me now.
     
  2. Throughout the day, Andy forced me to do a lot of things. For example: go to school, sit and eat lunch with my old friends, be "pleasant". All those things weren't as hard as I thought they'd be. I always went to school, so that was easy enough. Sitting with my friends again really made a difference. At first, it was completely and utterly awkward, but I got the hang of it all too quickly. Aurora, Makayla, and Klaudia were all so kind and welcoming. I think part of it was because I had been so anti-social that that hadn't expected me back. Being pleasant changed my crowd. People no longer ostracize me and started talking to me again. That was a progess of only ONE DAY! I was actually proud of myself. After I got home, Andy and I had a Q
     
  3. omg. I think I might cry. half of the update is gone and I poured my heart into this. not okay.
     
  4. here i'll continue it.
     
  5. OMFG IT DID IT AGAIN.
     
  6. sorry guys it wont post... I'll try continueing it tomorrow
     
  7. U cant do the "and" symbol cuz it makes everything after gone
     
  8. here the continuation



    and A session, but he didn't have many questions because he was with me all throughout the seven weeks.

    "What's Heaven like? Nonono what's God like?" Andy chuckled.

    "I can't say," He answered slyly," That's classified."

    "Fine. Then... Why can't anyone but me see you. Is it because you on a mission for me so only I can see and feel you? Or..."

    "Nope. I can show myself to anyone I want. I can make anyone feel me or my presence. I just choose not to show myself to other people."

    "Ooooohhh!" I was amazed. It was like I was a 6 year old trying to learn how to tie a bow. It was like magic.

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    After a while of asking and answering, we went to the park to try out Andrew's going-into-other-peoples'-bodies skills.

    "Look, there," I pointed," The one in the khakis and the blue v-neck!"

    "Okay!" Andy flapped his wings and disappeared into the guy's body. Suddenly, the guy turned towards me and started running.

    It was Anthony Brown. He was the High School hottie. Anthony had the All-American-Surfer-boy thing going on. Honestly, I was attracted to him, but everyone was.

    "Did it work?" Anthony-err-Andrew... I don't know what to call him. I nodded, dumbfounded. Anthony-yes I decided to call him by his body's owner's name- sat down and stared into my eyes for a while. Andrew and I had the connection that we hadn't had for a long time. No, not sex. It was an emotional connection. Before we knew it, we were making out intensely. It felt like I was actually making out with Andy again. Maybe it was Andrew inside Anothony's body. Our long kiss was interrupted by a shrieking voice.

    "ANTHONY! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING WITH THAT WHÖRE?"

    I turned around and saw Bridget Rivers. No, not the one that throws the parties. It was Bridget Rivers. The notorious biotch. This is exactly what I was worried about.

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    Thanks for all your support guys! Post or bump if you like my story! Also check out One or the other.
     
  9. not to sound self centered or anything but I NEED SOME FEEDBACK!!! okay? lol 
     
  10. i admit my selfishness here too. BUMP! lol
     
  11. Plz continue this story and ur other story too I love them
     
  12. Omg!! What's gonna happen!!?????? I can't wait!!!
     
  13. It is soooo good
     
  14. ill update in the afternoon