Dirty Deeds Left Behind

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Dittle (01), May 31, 2011.

  1. Damn
    He's fucked up.
     
  2. He carries the burden.
     
  3. WHY CAN'T YOU NO SEE?!?! :mad:
     
  4. This is amazing Dittle.
     
  5. WAIT! Isn't their five sences... See, hear, taste, smell... What about Feel...  will that come in later 
     
  6. Read the start, 

    "Can't you feel the grips of hell"
     
  7. ;) thanks jodie
     
  8. DANGIT!!! Darn... I felt smart for a second.
     
  9. LMAOOOO
     
  10. I'll update later..
     
  11. Analdjwldjekdkwldjwosjsksjsk

    Omfgggg

    Get this copyrighted and published.
     
  12. Yervok grasped his head with both hands. And let out a primal roar. Pain... The pain that's equivalent to a thousand deaths shot through hisbscream and etched it's dirty face upon his.

    The ground began to shake at his roar. His heart beat so fast it was a miracle it did not burst.

    The flames that were on him grew.

    Suddenly, The grey man was behind him. But Yervok did not notice and ran out of the cave, grasping his head. Screaming in pain. Roaring in anger.

    Flooded with a emotion untold.
     
  13.  LOVE IT
     
  14. "Flooded with an emotion untold."

    How I love that line..
     
  15. Yervok ):
    Moooree!