You should try putting paragraphs i like your story but it's a bit disturbing when I see only a few lines on one post for a story.
[Nate] I'd never seen Kyle break down before. He'd always hid his emotion from everyone. Even when he broke up with Bailey, his emotions were unreadable. But as I stood there, there was no possible way for him to hide it. Kyle was breaking down. He didn't just hit rock bottom, he smashed into it. Bailey hated him and no one could change her mind. It was over. I knew it, Kyle knew it, Eli knew it, and Bella knew it. We all knew that no matter how hard he tried, Bailey didn't want him anymore. Eli had won her over, and Kyle was desperately needing someone. Problem was, it wasn't just someone. It was her. And because of his mistakes, Kyle lost her.
[Bailey] My head hurt but I payed no attention to it. Along with a headache, I had a heartache. The pain from Kyle's force didn't faze me anymore. The pain from the look on his face did. I didn't owe Kyle anything at all. But the pain hit me harder than he ever could. I wasn't if being Eli was right, but it kept my mind off Kyle. He and Nate continued to avoid my gaze and Bella stayed out of it completely. Eli hadn't noticed it and that was good. No one found out about Kyle's abuse because no one told. He was acting in the heat of the moment and we all knew it. But when I was by my locker, Nate approached me. "Bay," "Yes?" "Kyle is going to do something dangerous. He has a gun"
[Bailey] The look on Nate's face said it all. He was scared. Nate was captain of the varsity soccer team, class president, and all around great guy. Seeing him like this was crazy. He was always strong and happy. Kyle had been tipped over the edge. "Where is he?" "I don't know. He missed practiced and..." Nate ran his hands through his sandy blonde hair. I impulsively grabbed his hands in mine and his cheeks turned bright red. "We're going to find him. I promise."
[Question before update] 1. Who should Bailey be with? 2. Wanna see more of a character? 3. What should happen to Kyle? ANSWER AND I'LL UPDATE