omg.. It took me forever to read! I've been reading it since the middle of March and I really like it, please update
Rick's point of view: So, it means... Nash just hired those three witnesses?! Ugh. I should have known. She lied about me being the father of her unborn child. She unjustly accused Chelsea for beating her up. Seriously, how many more lies will she tell just to break my relationship with Chelsea?! "GAH! I told to keep your voice DOWN! Someone might hear you..." Nash loudly whispered. "But Boss... the money..." "FINE!" Nash angrily exclaimed as she grabbed her purse. "Here. $100 each. Now, KEEP YOUR MOUTH SHUT and DON'T BOTHER ME EVER AGAIN." Nash screamed. The three men skipped away happily while waving their $100 proudly. "Idiots." Nash sighed as she rested her body against the wall. I scanned Nash's physical appearance. She still has fresh bruises all over her face and body. But those bruises look weird. I quickly looked at my wrists which were filled with bruises from my fight with Adam the other day. "Mine looks more bluish in color." I whispered as I compared my bruises with Nash's. Suddenly, I had a brilliant idea. I quickly ran to the nearest vending machine. I bought one soda in can and started shaking it vigorously. Then, I ran towards Nash once again and handed the soda to her. "What's this?" Nash asked, completely surprised. "Soda. It's for you." I offered as she reached for it. "Thanks." Nash murmured. "Really. Nash. What's your plan all along? Why do you have to lie about me being the father?" I said as I continually stared at the soda. Nash glared at me. "It's none of your business." I sighed. "Aren't you going to drink that?" I asked impatiently. "I will." Nash answered as she tried to open the cap. As soon as the cap was opened, soda started SQUIRTING everywhere. "RICK ANDERSON! Is this some practical JOKE?! Did you shake the can?! Look at me! I'm all wet!" Nash screamed. I stared at Nash as she wiped her face with her handkerchief. I continually stared at her. And alas! I saw the effect that I was looking for! "Sorry. But I gotta go." I called out as I quickly ran away. "Rick! Don't leave me like this!" Nash called out. I ignored her and started dialing Dale's number on my cellphone. "Hello?" "Dale!" "Rick?" "Dale, I have a favor to ask from you. Listen carefully..." After giving the necessary instructions to Dale, I rushed to the principal's office and found the principal and Chelsea still there. "Mr. Anderson, you took so lon-..." "I can prove that Chelsea is innocent!" I exclaimed excitedly. "How?" Chelsea asked. "Come with me! Quick!" I said. I led to the two of them to the rooftop. It has the perfect view of our school's swimming pool. "Now, why did you bring us her-..." "Shhh. Just watch Nash." I ordered firmly. "Where is she?" Chelsea asked as she tried to scan the whole swimming pool. "There!" I exclaimed as I pointed at Nash and Dale together. "I thought Rick called me out here?! Now, where is he?!" Nash screamed angrily. "I really don't know." Dale smirked. Dale looked up and met my gaze. He gave me a wink. "Now, watch closely." I uttered. Chelsea and the principal leaned forward to get a better view. In a split second, Dale walked behind Nash and suddenly PUSHED her to the pool. *SPLASH* "Holy cow!" the principal exclaimed. Suddenly, a swimmer in the pool shrieked. "AAAH! Why is the water turning BLUE?!" "Yeees! EEEW! The water's turning blue!" The three of us fell silent as we watch the small part of the pool turning blue. Suddenly, Nash emerged from the water. Chelsea and the principal gasped. You know why? Because Nash's face became completely flawless.
ZOMG Blump! Another amazing part of the story added. I personally think Fan Fic writers should think about actually writing a book. :3 The stories are incredibly amazing.
LeGinger— Yes, they should. Like Eliza02, MommaPie/SensualPie, TheAndi, -Hearts-Katie, Happiness_Sadness (aka Qin), iLoveBlizzy, etc. Eliza02— Yes!! An update! I love your cliffhangers within a single paragraph Keep up the good work! Readers— Please stop the incessant bumping. Yes, a bump within a feedback comment is okay, but if your only comment is a bump, it's annoying. I know I used to do that, but I've stopped. It's clogging up the story and, in a way, spamming. I'm sure no one wants this beautiful story to get clogged up with bumps. I'm merely helping iLoveBlizzy spread the word, but don't get mad at her. This isn't an unreasonable demand. It is for the good of the writers, constant readers and new readers out there.
*Yes, a bump within a feedback comment is okay, and so is a bump to move it up to the first page, but when it is already on the first page and there's nothing to bump, please post constructive criticism or comments instead. I'm not saying be mean, I'm saying help the writers out.
Thank you very much for the support. Angel. But actually, "bumps" are okay for me. I have nothing against them. I actually appreciate them since they're signs of support from readers. So, I won't be angry if you 'bump' this story. Just sayin' Angel, I'm not saying that you're wrong. You do have a point. Thank you and love youuuu!