Rick's point of view: "... am a total virgin." I confessed courageously. Nash's face turned ashen white. Chelsea's jaw dropped. The principal laughed boisterously. "R-Rick A-Anderson? A-A virgin? STOP joking! Hahahaha." the principal teased. I felt my blood boil. "Believe it or not. I am a VIRGIN." I persuaded. The principal's visage turned serious. "Then whose child is it?" the principal asked directly to Nash. "Huh?" Nash said, completely alarmed, "I-It's Rick's" Chelsea walked closer to Nash. "How many months is the baby?" Nash froze. "U-um, about 6 months?" "Impossible!" I exclaimed, "By that time, there should be a baby bump." I explained while looking at Nash's flat stomach. "I give up!" Nash exclaimed, "It's a two-month old baby." I smiled broadly. "Then, the child really is not mine. Nash, you were in London for the last two months. How could I even get you pregnant when you were so far away?" I explained logically. The principal looked at Nash. "So, what can you say about this?" Nash's eyes welled up with tears. Without saying a word, she quickly left the room. The principal, Chelsea and I were left in the room. No one uttered a word. We were probably shocked with the turn of events. "Wait a minute," I said, finally breaking the silence, "I have to confirm things with Nash." I quickly exited the room and looked for Nash. Finally, I found Nash, together with the three men that witnessed Chelsea's so called 'beating up'. I tiptoed closer to them and hid behind a table. "Boss, we did what you asked. Where's the money you promised?" one man said angrily. "Let's not talk here. Someone might hear us." Nash hushed. "C'mon, boss. The money! Give it to us now." another man insisted. "Don't talk to me. I'm kind of irritated at the moment." Nash hissed. "C'mon, boss. Give us the money. We did what you told us to do. We... "... pretended as witnesses and blamed that 'Chelsea' girl for beating you up!"
AUTHOR'S NOTE I really appreciate Forever_Flame's and LeGinger's feedback. It means a lot to me to get those kinds of comments. So, once again, comments/suggestions/criticisms are welcome and highly appreciated. Happy Reading~
First of all, I KNEW CHELSEA DIDN'T DO IT And second of all, I really like how you put the turn of events together. Event though it's more of a romance themed story, you managed to make it thrilling not only by using romance but also by making everything click. I LOVE IT
The story is really good. I like the fact that you have many different thrilling concepts. Maybe a little more characters, a best friend or something, and a bit of back story and all. Another way you can improve is to MAKE RICK AND CHELSEA END UP TOGETHER ALREADY! Loljk, it's an excellent story.
Joyce and Andi! Thanks for the feedback! Actually, Andi, I was going to put a bestfriend character for Chelsea, but I don't know what happened. I guess I forgot. Anyway, I'll consider your opinions. Thank you again!
GREAT STORY!!!!! It's always interesting! And surprising too! You don't need to change anything about it, it's perfect as it is. And I want Chelsea and Rick to get back together too! Bump!!!!!!