Desperate

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Eliza02 (01), Nov 9, 2011.

  1. Eliza hun it's okay. We're all waiting patiently for you,and if you're too busy it's okay : )
     
  2. I read this whole thing and im in love eith this, your a great writer and nawwww diss is sooo cutee!. 
    BUMP:)
     
  3. FINALLY. I found time to update. I really would want to thank the people who didn't give up on this story. Means a lot to me! 
     
  4. Adam's point of view:

    (continuation of FLASHBACK)

    1 minute and 4 seconds left.
    Where's my chocolate cake?!

    Hahaha.
    Who was I kidding?
    No one can ran that fast. The bakery is far from this school. Not even the fastest runner in our school could make it.

    As I thought, this relationship won't last long.
    But I DON'T care. I just want to play with someone's feelings.

    Well, 6 seconds before 10 minutes is over...
    5...
    4...
    3...
    2...

    Suddenly, the door swung open.

    Chelsea appeared, sweating like a pig. She was holding a cute little box.

    My eyes widened in surprise.
    WOW. That was FAST.
    This makes it even more exciting.

    I smiled evily.
    "Get over here and bring that chocolate cake to me." I ordered sternly.

    Chelsea, who cannot walk properly, stumbled straight to me.

    She smiled weakly and handed me the box.
    "Here."

    Suddenly, I realized what was missing.
    "Fork. I need a fork." I said as bluntly as I could.

    "Huh?" Chelsea mumbled as she massaged her legs.

    Angered, I shouted at her.
    "That's so STUPID of you! Didn't you even think on how I'll eat this without a fork?!"

    Chelsea shivered in fright.
    "I-I'm so sorry..."

    "I don't need an APOLOGY! I need a FORK right HERE. right NOW."

    Chelsea quickly stood up and dashed towards the door.

    I sat back and relaxed.
    This is just too FUN.

    While waiting for Chelsea, I started planning on how to make her life a lot worse.

    Chelsea, once again, barged inside. She looked more haggard than before. On her hand was a little fork.

    Chelsea smiled and handed me the fork.
    "Here. Please enjoy your meal."

    I was surprised.
    How could she still smile like that after all those things that I've done to her?!
    Weird girl.
    Well, as if I cared.

    I opened the box and spotted a delicious-looking cake. It seemed expensive.

    Suddenly, I had an idea.

    I quickly glared at her.

    Chelsea shook.

    "I-Is something wrong?" she trembled.

    I GRABBED the cake and THREW it on the floor.

    Chelsea, who was so surprised, gasped.

    "IT WAS THE WRONG CAKE! IT LOOKS DISGUSTING!" I screamed angrily.

    Tears welled up on Chelsea's eyes.
    "I-I'm so sorry. I-I don't have money anymore to buy a new one."

    "Well, you're useless." I snapped and barged out of the room.

    Days passed and Chelsea followed me like a little dog. Everybody pitied her, but she didn't care at all. I SCREAMED at her. I PUNCHED her. I made her do my homework. But she won't leave at all.

    It made me want to torture her more.

    "Hi Adam." a hot girl purred at me while I was fixing my things in my locker.

    "Hi Stacey." I smiled. Oh boy. She was hot.

    Instinctively, I grabbed her waist and gave her a gentle kiss on the lips.

    Stacey, who looked surprised, giggled.
    "I thought you had a girlfriend."

    I smiled.
    "Girlfriend? She's more like a DOG."

    Suddenly, I heard a loud thud behind me. I turned around and saw a wide-eyed Chelsea.

    "I-Is that true?!" she stammered as hot tears fell from her eyes.

    I laughed.
    "You just realized now?!"

    Chelsea charged towards me. But instead of facing me. She faced Stacey.

    "WhAT DID YOU DO, you $:mad:!
     
  5. My hands flew and SLAPPED Chelsea across her face.

    "Don't you KNOW?! I was just PLAYING with you. I NEVER LOVED you. You're just my petty SLAVE, that's all."

    Chelsea froze as her expression DARKENED.

    Stacey giggled.
    "How can Adam LOVE YOU anyway?! YOU'RE UGLY. Just go back to HELL and DIE."

    I laughed.
    "Exactly."

    Chelsea looked COMPLETELY FURIOUS.
    She grabbed a little box from her bag and THREW the box to me. The contents of the box came flying.

    And...

    SPLAT!

    The chocolate cake spreadt over my face.
    Stacey gasped.

    "WHAT DID YOU JUST D-"

    "YOU THINK IT WAS FUN TO PLAY WITH MY FEELINGS?!!" Chelsea screamed, tears continually fell from her face.

    Chelsea grabbed her bag.

    "YOU DESERVE IT ANYWAY. I swore to myself that if I see your face or your other family members' faces...











    ... I'll KILL YOU ALL."
     
  6. First! BUMP! GASP! BUMP!
     
  7. Bump!!!!!!
     
  8.  Holy damn! I love this story!! Will there be a prequel?
     
  9. Ehh oops  I read the update thingy on my wall wrong 
     
  10. Holy poop.! Lmao. Bummp.:)
     
  11. Whoa  bump!! 
     
  12. Yayyyyyyy!! Bump!
     
  13. YAAAY UPDATE
    YOU UDATED TWICE THOSE WERE AWESOMME
    Adam was a dichole