Desperate

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Eliza02 (01), Nov 9, 2011.

  1. bump! awwwww.... 




     
  2. That is the sweetest everrrr! Bump!
     
  3. Bump! 
     
  4. Love It Sooo Sweet But Dudes A Jerk  Him!
     
  5. Bump!!! Update plz!!!
     
  6. Awwwwww nice move rick
    Should have punched that jerk in the face he deserved it. i was gonna say a different word
     
  7. Whoaaaaaa!! Hold freaking shit! I just read the WHOLE thing and this is AMAZING!
     
  8. Holy* damn you autocorrect... 
     
  9. AWWWWW sweet! lol bump
     
  10. Awwww bump! 
     
  11. SO SORRY!!!....I went in-active there for awhile. But I'm back tho. Just re-read the whole thing and I love it!.
     
  12. Chelsea's point of view:

    "... consider this as my second violation." Rick called out to William who turned around and face both of us.

    Rick grabbed my hand and gave me a gentle kiss on my lips.

    Everyone around us gasped.
    Some covered their mouths in shock.
    Some stopped walking and stared at us with their eyes wide open.

    And me?
    My heart was about to jump out from my chest.

    Rick gently released me and hugged me tightly.

    "I'll not let anyone hurt you, Chelsea." Rick whispered.

    Silence.

    William just stared blankly at us.

    Suddenly, the whole school ROARED in cheers.

    Everyone rushed to us and gave us their "congratulations" and "way to gos".

    Not only boys surrounded us. Girls came to me too and patted my back.
    Everybody was smiling.

    I felt good.
    I felt accepted.


    Little did I know...


    ...that someone was glaring at me from behind.

    Boys began dragging Rick away from me.

    "Let's walk home together later!" Rick called out as he was dragged away with the boys.

    I blushed and excused myself from the girls.
    I really didn't like the attention.

    I exited the room and a beauty blocked my way. She smiled sweetly that made my heart melt.

    "So, you're Rick's girl?" she smiled.

    I blushed a little.
    "I guess."

    She giggled and extended her hand.
    "Let's be friends. My name is...














    "... Natasha."
     
  13. Who natasha?
    Bummmmmp!!