Desperate

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Eliza02 (01), Nov 9, 2011.

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  3. BIG FAN OF YOUR STORY CANT WAIT TO SEE WHO CHELSEA CHOOSES I THINK IT SHOULD BE RICK
     
  4. OMG!! BUMP!!!! I want her to be with RICK!!
     
  5. Ken's point of view:

    I walked to school, feeling prepared.
    Then, I saw Rick at the gate.
    I gave him a feiry glare which made him tremble.

    Ha!
    Be prepared, Rick Anderson.
    Regina and I planned a little surprise for you to destroy what is rightfully mine.

    I saw Chelsea with her shiny black hair tied in a ponytail.
    My heart skipped a beat.
    She is the only one who can make me goofy like this.

    "Hey, Chels!" I cheerfully called out, giving out my best smile.

    "Hey, Ken." she said groggily. She had huge eyebugs.

    "I'm so excited for later. Give me a good answer, okay?" I happily said.

    Chelsea's eyes popped out.
    She looked up and met my eyes. Her eyes turned sad.

    Uh-oh.
    What's with that EXPRESSION?!
    Don't tell me...

    "Ken, I'll just send a note in your locker to let you know when I'm going to meet you." she lifelessly said while pointing at my colorful locker.
    She reached for my hand and gently said, "Whatever my decision may be, I hope we'll still be good friends."

    WHAT DID SHE JUST SAY??!!!
    Didn't she just REJECT me INDIRECTLY?!
    I felt my heart break into a thousand pieces.

    I dragged myself to class to class.
    Everything was a blur. I couldn't feel anything.

    I went to my locker after 2nd period. A piece of paper greeted me when I opened it. Written in the paper was: "2:00 pm, Rooftop". I sighed.

    But I would NOT give up.
    I rushed to Rick's locker. I knew Rick's lock code so I unlocked it easily and grabbed the piece of paper that was similar to mine.
    I wrote number "1" next to the "2:00 pm", making it look "12:00 pm".

    I smiled evily. This was brilliant.
    I immediately called Regina.
    "Regina? Change of plans. Listen to me carefully..."

    "Ken! What are we doing here? It's not 2:00 yet. It's just 12:00!" Chelsea cried out as I forcefully dragged her to the rooftop.

    "You have to listen." I said, pretending to be sad. Chelsea curiously leaned closer to me.
    "Don't trust Rick! He does not love you. He's still with Regina!" I lied.

    Chelsea's eyes popped out.
    "NONSENSE!" she spat out.
    "He said he loves me."

    "That's a lie!" I convincingly lied.
    She turned away, refusing to hear another word.

    Then, I heard Regina's voice coming nearer. I also heard an angry man's voice. Must be Rick.

    Hehe. The PLAN is in action.

    "Chelsea!" I called out as I grabbed her arm.
    "What?" she said, really annoyed.
    "Come eat the lasagna with me." I said while dragging her nearer and nearer to the planned destination.

    When I saw Regina, together with the annoyed Rick, I gave her the signal. Regina winked and took action.

    Just in time, Chelsea looked at their direction.
    Her eyes widened and watered immediately.
    She clenched her fists as they were shaking terribly.
    She opened her mouth and gave the loudest shout ever.






    "WH-WHAT ARE YOU BOTH DOING??"
     
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  8. Rick's point of view:

    I shivered as Ken gave me an angry glare in front of the school gate.

    This is it.
    It's now or never.

    I saw Chelsea literally dragging herself to her locker. I immediately ran to her and gave her a hand.

    As soon as she saw me, she brightened up and reddened.
    Is it a GOOD sign? :)

    "Hi, Rick." she greeted cheerfully.

    "Hey, Chelsea," I answered, "You okay?" I asked as I noticed her huge eyebugs.

    "Ya, thanks for asking." she answered happily.
    "Rick, I'll just send you a note regarding the "meeting" later. I'll put it in your locker." she said.

    I looked at her as she walked away.
    She was really in a good mood.
    I hope my luck will continue until later.

    After 2nd period, I quickly visited my locker. As expected, a piece of paper greeted me. Written there was: "12:00 pm, Rooftop."
    The number "1" beside "2:00 pm" was odd. It seemed it shouldn't be there.
    Oh, well. I must be over-thinking.

    As soon as the hands of my watch ticked 11:57 am, I immediately rushed to the rooftop.
    I sat down on the corner and did some breathing exercises to avoid hyperventilating from excitement.

    Then, I heard footsteps.
    I quickly fixed my hair and arranged my clothes.

    I smiled.
    "Hi, Chel-"

    "Hi, Rick." a seductive voice greeted me.

    "Regina?! What are you doing here?" I asked, feeling annoyed.

    "Why? Don't you want to see your girlfriend who love you so dearly?" Regina said, adding honey to her voice.

    "Girlfriend?! We were over a long time ago." I said.

    "Don't be like that, my Ricky pooh." Regina pouted as she grabbed me by the collar.

    Last time, I enjoyed being played at by Regina.
    But not anymore.

    "Get off me!" I ordered sternly, quickly walking away.

    "Rick!" she called out, and grabbed me by the arm.

    Regina, then, looked to her left and winked.
    I turned to see who she was winking to.

    But before I could do that, Regina grabbed my face and kissed me.

    I tried to get out of her, but her long pointed nails buried in my face, causing it to bleed and making me utterly weak.

    In a split second, Regina turned me around, making it look like that I was the one kissing her.

    Regina's nails buried deeper into my face. I tried to get away from her, but me being a gentleman, cannot afford to forcefully push or punch her to the ground.

    I openes my tear-filled eyes and saw a familiar figure standing in front of us.
    My heart sank.
    There stood, the girl I so much loved, staring at us with her tear-filled eyes.
    She opened her mouth...








    "WH-WHAT ARE YOU BOTH DOING???!!!"





    "WH-WHAT ARE YOU BOTH DOING???!!!"
     
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  10. Poor Rick continue cant wait to see the end of this story
     
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  12. Chelsea's point of view:

    Wh-what are they doing??!
    My heart is thumping furiously.
    I can feel my blood boiling.

    Completely forgetting my etiquette as a lady, I let out an ear-splitting shout.

    "WH-WHAT ARE YOU BOTH DOING??!"

    Rick and Regina were absolutely startled. They fell on the floor at the same time.
    Rick's eyes widened as blood dripped from his face.

    Silence befell upon the four of us.
    Regina was the first one to recover from the awkward situation and smiled evily.

    "We were sharing a passionate kiss, silly." she teased.
    "N-No, we're NOT!" Rick desperately defended.

    My heart felt it was squashed by a 100-ton elephant.
    Fighting back the gush of tears, I bit my lip.
    I should have believed Ken.

    "P-please believe me, Chelsea. I wasn't going out with her. The one I love is YOU." Rick begged as he got on his knees.

    I sniffed.
    Anger dominated my mind and my heart.
    I made up my mind.

    "Even though it's not 2:00 yet, I will now announce my decision." I said, feeling a flood of tears rushing to me.

    "2:00?" Rick repeated, looking confused.

    "I want a guy," I interrupted, "who does not lie and loves me and no other woman." I declared.

    Rick's face darkened while Ken's face lightened up.

    "I'm sorry, Rick." I sadly whispered, letting one teardrop fall from my left eye. I grabbed Ken's hand and walked away.

    "THANK YOU, Chelsea! I looove you!" Ken cheerfully said as he carried me in his muscular arms.

    I did not answer.
    My heart is too messed up.

    "I'll go tell everybody!" Ken gleefully said as he hopped from class to class.

    I smiled sadly.
    Maybe going out with Ken won't be bad at all.
    I'll just have to forget about HIM.

    Everything was a blur.
    I should be happy that I finally got a boyfriend, but my heart fell heavy.

    "Chelsea, some Seniors are calling you!" a classmate of mine called out.

    I quietly jumped out of my seat and followed the seniors outside.
    I can't focus.
    I can't just forget what happened a while ago. That...

    "... Think you can just STEP on us just because you're GOING OUT with OUR BELOVED KEN???!!" one Senior shouted.

    *CRASH*

    That was the last thing I heard
    Everything became utterly dark.