Desperate

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Eliza02 (01), Nov 9, 2011.

  1. Bump!!!!!!!
     
  2. blah blah blah if you can read this then you are awesome [\color]
     
  3. Yay! I'm awesome 
     
  4. AWESOME! BUMP!
     
  5. Nash? Is that her real name? 

    I thought it was Natasha 

    'Cuz I originally read it as Tash 
     
  6. @ Tiffany:
    You're totally correct! :)

    Updating later. I have exams for tomorrow so it might take a while. :)
     
  7. Rick's point of view:

    "An ex-girlfriend?" Dale repeated, "Don't you have many of those? Why is this 'Nash' special?"

    I flinched.
    "She's not special." I growled.

    Dale looked at me seriously.
    "You better focus on one girl only before you hurt both."

    "Don't worry. Chelsea's the only one." I assured Dale with a smile and walked away.

    I walked slowly along the corridors.
    Why did Nash come back?!
    What did she want from me?

    Suddenly, I saw Adam walking limply across the corridor.

    "Adam!" I called out to him, "Where are you going?"

    Adam, who looked startled, quickly looked away.
    "I'm going... um... somewhere. See you around."

    "Okay..." I trailed off.

    Adam's definitely acting weird.
    I watched him as he exited the door and as he glanced at me for the last time.

    I grabbed my cellphone.

    "Chelsea?" I quickly said as I heard the click.

    "Rick! How are you?" Chelsea cheerfully asked.

    "Better. Now that I've heard your voice." I cooed.

    "Aaaw," Chelsea beamed, "I felt better also. So, what's up?"

    I smiled.
    "Nothing. I just want to hear your voice."

    Chelsea laughed.
    "Stop! You're seriously making me want to see you right this very moment."

    I smiled.
    "How about 8:00 pm, your place?"

    "That's a deal! I'll cook." Chelsea excitedly said and ended the call.

    I rushed home and started packing up some games and stuff for my "romantic" dinner with Chelsea.

    And do you know?

    I showered 4 times for this dinner.
    I just have to look and smell best for this.

    When I was all set, I grabbed my keys and zoomed to Chelsea's house.

    I stopped the car and thought for a minute.
    "What if I surprise her by climbing in her balcony?" I thought aloud.

    Thinking that it was a good idea, I got out of the car and tiptoed to Chelsea's house.

    Suddenly, I stopped.

    There was a man again.

    Same figure.
    Same position.
    Same clothes.

    It was the STALKER AGAIN.

    I tiptoed some more and stared at him.

    He looked awfully familiar.

    The stalker shifted position and walked towards his car.

    I gasped.

    Was I imagining it?



    Or the stalker was...





















    ... really WALKING LIMPLY?!
     
  8. OMG!! It cant be Adam??? BUMP..moar!!
     
  9. Omg it's Adam!!!!! Update please !!!!!!!!!!!! ASAP 
     
  10. FJXCKRFLDBDKDKN

    BUMP!