Desperate

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Eliza02 (01), Nov 9, 2011.

  1. Asdfghjkl I BET ITS KEN 
     
  2. Its not ken AWESOME UPDATE
     
  3. ARGHHHHHHH. UPDATE NOWWWWWWWWWW!
     
  4. bump!!!! 




     
  5. Bump, I bet it's what's his face... Ricks brother!!
     
  6. Rick's point of view:

    "Who is he?" I asked Dale.

    *RING*

    I decided to ignore the phone call. Now is not the appropriate time to answer phone calls.

    "So, who is-"

    *RING*

    "What's his nam-"

    *RING*

    Irritated, I grabbed my cellphone from my pocket and pressed the ANSWER button.

    "Rick!" the man on the other line exclaimed.

    "Who is this?!" I snapped.

    "This is Adam." the man loudly whispered.

    "Why did you call? Why are you whispering?" I growled at the caller.

    "Um..." Adam mumbled.

    "Will this keep on happening?! This is like the 3rd time you're interrupting." I scoffed.

    "It's just Dad..." Adam trailed off.

    "Dad?" I snapped, "Isn't he in jail?"

    "I know." Adam whispered, "D-dad's friends are here..."

    "Friends?" I shivered.

    "G-good thing that I was able to hide here behind the shelves." Adam whispered. His voice was trembling with fear.

    "Wh-what about m-mom?" I asked nervously.

    "She's safe," Adam whispered, "Just quickly call the police and go here as fast as you could."

    I was about to disconnect the phone call when I heard on the other line...

    "I FOUND OUR FRIEND'S SON! HE'S HERE! BEHIND THE BOOKSHELVES!!!"

    I can hear Adam gasp.
    What about me?
    Because of fear...
    I remained frozen.

    Then, I heard an ear-splitting shout.
    "THIS IS FOR MY FRIEND WHO IS IN JAIL RIGHT NOW!"

    Suddenly...

















    ... a GUNSHOT rang out.
     
  7.  ADAMMMMM!!